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英語の添削お願いします。

語学学校を卒業するにあたりスピーチをしなければいけません。 文章を考えたのですが添削してもらえますか? Thank you everyone,especially.....Thank you my friends. I've spend in here for three months.I could have a lot of friend and experience.I had a great time in here. I want to talk about a lot more if there is an opportunity to meet you again.So,I'm going to continue to study English for improving my English level. I'll miss you.Have a good school life.Thank you. よろしくお願いします。

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Thank you everyone,especially.....Thank you my friends. ここは、最初のeveryoneだけでいいです 「友達」じゃない人はなんか待遇違う感じになる Thank you, everyone. もしくは、先生に対して「・・・」、一緒に勉強生徒に対して「・・・」、その他関係者に対して「・・・」とそれぞれ理由を付け加えてthank youとすべき 例 Thank you everyone. This is the last speech in English I make in this school. My English is still not good, though, I'm going to try to convey my appreciation to you in English. I thank all the students who have studied with me so far. All the learning activities with you were fun, and you will be with me in my memory. I will never forget you. I would like to say special thanks to Mr. (or Ms.) "Z". You kindly took a great care for me, who could not speak even a word at the beginning of this learning ecperience. I promise I will write you after I get back to Japan. So, please don't put it in a trash box without reading it. ... 添削 I've spend three months in here. I [made] a lot of friend, and had a great time in here. I want to talk about a lot more if there is an[other] opportunity to meet you again. [Until then,] I [will] continue to study English [to] improv[e] my English level. I'll miss [all of] you. Have a good school life. Thank you.

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