英作文の添削お願いします。
問題文はImagine yourself ten years from now. Describe your life at that time,and the steps you will take to get there.という内容です。
After ten years from now,I will be an English teacher. To become an English teacher, there are three steps. First, I enter a university. I will study English hard there. Second, I go to theU.S. to study English. I would like to learn English expressions and American culture. At the same time, I want to make friends with there. I will have a good time with new friends. In addition to that, I would like to visit traditional placeses in theU.S. these experiences let me grow up to teach skills. Third, I get the teacher's license. Through these steps, I will be an English teacher.
文法的な誤りや内容構成など添削よろしくお願いします。
