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◆I’m so happy I have met you. → I'm happy with you. 「あなたと一緒にいられて幸せだ」 とすれば、文字数で6文字、スペース含めれば9文字削減できます。 ◆I have learned ... → I've learned ... 文字数で1文字、スペース含め2字削減できます。 ◆these are what you have shown me ... → these are what you've shown me ... 文字数で1文字、スペース含めて2文字削減できます。 ◆ I thank you ... の英文を、with me で止めてピリオドをうつ。そして、もとの文にあったコンマと and を省き、I will never forget your love. を I'll never ... に改める。 →文字数で4文字、スペース含めると7字削減できます。 以上で、スペース含めて20字分の削減につながります。 ◆お姉さんの存在を、お相手がよくご存知であれば、 my late sister は省略できます。 これだけで文字数で12字、15字削除できます。

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Happy birthday! I feel something mysterious, for your birthday is the same as my late sister Shoko's. I'm happy with you. I've learned many things from you: your strong passion, profound emotion, great affection, warm heart and respectful sentiments... these are all what you've shown me in my distress over my sister's death and my other experiences. ※I thank you for being always with me. ※I'll never forget your love. ※I love you and will love you for ever. Best wishes, and with my sincere gratitude, A子. ※※I will always remember that you were there for me all the time. 何とか入りました! 皆様のおかげです。 本当にありがとうございます。 ここで終わりにする予定だったのですが、自分が本来考えていた文章と照らし合わせてみて、※※の文章を入れたかったなぁと、ふと思ったのでした。 字数を削ってくださいと言っておきながら何ですが、※の文章を削って、※※の文章を挿入すると、文章的にはいかがなものでしょうか。 ちなみに、申し遅れましたが、彼の誕生日は12月10日で、私の余命もそのくらいと言われています。 直前までやっぱり変えたい、どうしたい、こうしたい、と悩むかもしれませんが、宜しくお願い致します。 ご回答ありがとうございました。

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