3 Reasons Why My Community is Happy
- My community is generally happy. The reason I find my community generally happy is greeting each other. Studies have shown that greetings can produce hormones that reduce stress. In fact, my community is always greeting each other.
- Another reason I find my community generally happy is to play with children. Playing with children will make you fun and happy. According to the University of Illinois, exercising for 20 minutes will make you feel happy.
- The last reason I find my community generally happy is smile. There is a study that when you smile, the happy hormone dopamine appears, and you become happy. In fact, I'm always happy because my community laughs constantly.
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大学英語の課題であなたのコミュニティは幸せか不幸かという問いがありました。 3 reasons why my community is happy: Greeting each other, smiling, playing together My community is generally happy. My community refers to my part-time school childcare. The reason I find my community generally happy is greeting each other. Studies have shown that greetings can produce hormones that reduce stress. In fact, my community is always greeting each other.Another reason I find my community generally happy is to play with children. Playing with children will make you fun and happy. According to the University of Illinois, exercising for 20 minutes will make you feel happy. The last reason I find my community generally happy is smile. There is a study that when you smile, the happy hormone dopamine appears, and you become happy. In fact, I'm always happy because my community laughs constantly. From the above, my community is happy と書いて提出したのですが先生にwhich communityといわれました？これはどういうことなのでしょうか？英語力低くてすいません
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＞先生にwhich communityといわれました？これはどういうことなのでしょうか？ ⇒例えば、冒頭の部分(第1文) で、 My community, Asahi Yochien (kindergarten), is generally happy. あるいは、 My community, Asahi Yochi－en (Rising Sun Kindergarten), is generally happy. とでもすればよかったのだとする。 つまり、My communityだけでは抽象的過ぎるので、固有名詞などを併記して欲しい、ということだと思います。
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yes i know, it is a very rare item. in all internet sites (ebay or amazon or other) it costs a lot. for this reason I asked you that I'm fine even if you find it used. maybe used it is cheaper. 自動翻訳だとでたらめなのでどうかお願いします。
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- by which とは 用法ですか何ですか？
It is the means by which individuals understand each other and are enabled to function together as a community.とありますが なぜwhichの前にbyがついているのでしょうか？どこからやってきたbyですか？
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この英文を訳してもらえませんか？ Hello dear new friend, how are you today i hope that every things is ok with you as is my pleassure to contact you after viewing your profile which really interest me in having communication with you if you will have the desire with me so that we can get to know each other better and see what happened in future. i will be very happy if you can write me through my email for easiest communication and to know all about each other,here is my email (****@yahoo.com) i will be waiting to hear from you as i wish you all the best for your day. yours new friend linda
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こちらの和訳を教えてください！ Even though I know about something. But I will still do it. It's not easy to change. Because you might leave me, forever. The 2 choices for me are: still here or leave out of your life but I know that there is not enough time for me to try. I just want to smile with you by my side for as long as possible. I hope that someday, you will understand the things that I have done. I love you so much. I do this because I don't want to lose you. if you had a chance to read this, you will know that I have good intentions. But since I love you. Only one reason is, I need you happy and you smile every day every time, My angel.
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