アンパンマンマーチをオリジナルで英訳しました。

質問

アンパンマンマーチが好きすぎて自分なりに
英訳してみました。

しかし英語に自信がないので是非チェックしていただきたいです。
お願いいたします！！！

Anpanman no march <English version>
※☆I know!
I am happy! what a joy i am living
Even if the wound in my heart harts
...
why were u born for ?
what do u live for ?
We can't answer it ?
Not on your life ! (Wouldn't want like that!)

Ur heart begins burning by what u live for(in) the moment

So u are going with a smile
※☆

※★Ah Anpanman tender you are
Go to protect everybody's dream

What is ur true happiness ?
what do u do when u are pleased?
End up with knowing that ?
Won't want like that!

Don't leave ur dream
Don't spill tears
So u are fling to the end of the world

That's right ! Don't be afraid for everybody
Love and courage are ur true friends
※★

This monument pasts in an instant?
A star glittering is going to disappear

So you are going with a smile

that's right ! You are happy!
What a joy you are living
Whatever enemy you are having even if?
※★
宜しくお願いいたします！！！

回答No.1

sandy_7729

先駆者がいましたよｗ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qrJ9Zct1gkk