- ベストアンサー
Should Japanese Schools Follow Examples on Protecting Students' Privacy?
- Japanese schools should not follow the example of other schools in protecting students' privacy.
- The rules in other schools do not openly state that teachers have the right to search a cell phone, which clearly violates students' privacy.
- While it is acceptable for teachers to collect and keep phones when students cause problems, accessing the content of the phones is not acceptable.
- みんなの回答 （1）
- 専門家の回答
質問者が選んだベストアンサー
★冒頭、規則に同意するか、しないか、即答えるべきです。 文末ではいけません。 I do not agree with these rules.とか。 ★japanese → Japanese example of itって？ rules という書き方をしたとしたら、それを受けて Japanese schools should not follow them to protect students' privacy. でよいと思います。 ★なぜかしら小文字で始まる in his 2010 privasy → privacy In his 2010 ariticle on privacy at school, "Choices Ahead" by sm Foan, he writes, "The rules do not openly state that the teachers have the right to search a cell phone." ariticle → article clealy → clearly student's privacy → students' privacy Of course, it is not wrong that the phones are collected and kept by the teachers, when the students have caused problems with them. However, to see what is in side the phones is no good. Therefore, I can't agree with the rules. 6/10 点ですかね？
