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・日本の国土の３分の２は山林である。 Two-thirds of Japan's land is mountains and forests. 宜しくお願いします＞＜
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Mountains, hills and forests cover two thirds of Japan. が一般的なようです。 "two thirds of the land of Japan”で検索しても上記文章がたくさんのサイトでひっかかりました（つまり、「land」は不要ということ） でも、日本を紹介したサイトなので、日本人が書いた（間違った）英語かも。。。と思い、英語を話す国／地方としてWalesについて、似たような文章で検索したら、イギリスのサイトでひっかかったので、上記の言い方がよいと思います。
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- cincinnati
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少し直しすぎと思いましたが、国土という文字を入れたかったので、書き込みしました。 Two thirds of Japanese national territory is covered by mountainous terrain and forestry land.
- princelilac
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ハイフンは要らないと思います。
- marbleshit
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Two-thirds of the land of Japan is mountains and forests. とされると良いと思います。
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