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日本語にあわせて英文を作成したのですが、添削をお願いしたいです。 １．月15万円では、今の僕の暮らしではギリギリだ Fifteen ten thousand yen a month is limited living for I am now. ２．その女優は、監督が望んでいることを言われなくても舞台で実演した The actress produced a perform with not compulsion on the stage how a stage manager expected all. ３．気をつけて、炭酸は激しく振ると蓋から漏れやすい be careful , A soda is apt to leak in a cap when it shaked hardly. ４．彼はプレイベートでも作業服を着ることをやめなかった He didn't stopped wearing work clothes when He's in private. よろしくお願いします。
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1. A hundred fifty thousand yen a month is barely enough to live for me now. ギリギリは下記のいいかたがあります。 http://eow.alc.co.jp/%E3%81%8E%E3%82%8A%E3%81%8E%E3%82%8A/UTF-8/ 2. Without being told the actress could act out on stage what the director had in mind. 3. Be careful, the soda might leak out of the cap if shaken vigorously. 4. He didn't stop wearing work clothes (even) when he wasn't working.
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＃１です。 in private には下記のように「こっそりと」とか「非公式に」という意味があり http://eow.alc.co.jp/in+private/UTF-8/ 「プレイベートでも」という原文の意味から少し変るのではないかと思います。他の回答者さんたちがいい案をお出しになると思います。
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do2007 さん、こんにちは。 １．月15万円では、今の僕の暮らしではギリギリだ Fifteen ten thousand yen a month is limited living for I am now. → It is bare for living with hundred fifty thousand yen for me right now. ・15万 → 150,000 は 1000単位で数字を言うので、 hundred fifty thousand ２．その女優は、監督が望んでいることを言われなくても舞台で実演した The actress produced a perform with not compulsion on the stage how a stage manager expected all. → That actress was performed what director wanted without knowing what he desired. ・with not compulsion → 「言われなくても」より強い単語なので、hopeとかdesire, wishとかでいいと思います ・how a stage manager expected all → 舞台マネージャー の様な響きなので、素直にdirectorでいいかと思います ３．気をつけて、炭酸は激しく振ると蓋から漏れやすい be careful , A soda is apt to leak in a cap when it shaked hardly. → It would be easy to leak if you shake a soda so hard, so be careful. ・be careful が最初に来てもいいと思います。（ただし、大文字、小文字の使い分けに注意です） ４．彼はプレイベートでも作業服を着ることをやめなかった He didn't stopped wearing work clothes when He's in private → He kept wearing work clothes although in his private time. ・「やめなかった」を「着続けた」に置き換えると判り易いかもしれません。
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