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英文を作りました。おかしなところがあったら教えてください。 Ringomo:Won't you play the Nekojyarashi with me? Mame:Yes,let's. There is a broken tricycle in the yard. “What a cool tricycle!” Mame's pattern looks as if he were an adzuki bean. Mame hunt for foods only when he is hungry. です。 Mameは飼い猫の名前です。 よろしくお願いします。
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英文を作りました(昨日)。 おかしなところがあったら教えてください。 Today is the day when Mame was born. Ringomo:“Mame Happy birthday! Mame:Thank you!Will you do me a favor? Ringomo:What? Mame:I'd like something sweet to eat. Ringomo:I have already finished making preparations for your party. We sat talking fora long time. We enjoyed ourselves at the party. です。 Mameは飼い猫の名前です。 よろしくお願いします。
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以下の私の英文チェックをお願いできますか？ （１）だからこそ父の言葉は彼女の胸に響いた。 That's why her father's words have touched her heart. （２）父は自らそれを止めたと思っているだろうが、もともと彼女にはそれをしようという気持ちはなかった。彼は彼女の気持ちがわからなかったのだろうか？父は娘のことをわかっているようで、でもまだ彼女がどういう人物なのかわかっていなかったのかもしれない。 Her father thought he stopped it but that not true. She was not going to do it. Didn't he know how she felt? He believed that he knew his daughter very well and he thought he knew what kind of person she is, but actually not. （３）それでも彼女の父に対する感謝の気持ちは残っている。 Even if, her feeling of gratitude to her father is still remaining. （４）しかし彼女の混乱した気持ちを整理するには時間が必要だった。 However, she did have to take a time to comoise (?) her thoughts. すみませんがよろしくお願いいたします。
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nekomacさん、おはようございます。 やった☆嬉しいです。 『まめの模様は、まるで小豆のように見える』という意味を込めました。 脇腹に、ど～んと大きめの小豆のような、大豆のような模様が一つあります。 なるほど、こういう時はcoatを使うんですね。 模様にsprinkleを使うのは可愛いなと思いました。 とても勉強になりました。 冠詞は引き続き復習します。。 nekomacさん、いつもいろいろとアドバイスして下さってありがとうございます。 励みになります。