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1)私は日曜日にお気に入りの衣料品店によく行き、必ず少なくとも1つは買います。※never fail to do を使用 I often go to a clothing store at Sunday and never fail to buy one. ----> I often go to one of my favorite clothing stores on Sundays and buy at least one item there. 2)他の店に比べて、その店の衣服は私の好みに合っているのです。※suit を使用 Compared other shop, the store's clothes is suit to my tastes. --->In comparison to other stores (Compared to the other stores,), what they have in the store matches my fashion taste (matches what I like about the fashion). 3)春になったので、私はジャケットを1着新調したいです。 Being gotten Spring, I want to have a jacket. --->I want to buy a new spring jacket as spring is just around the corner. 4)誕生日用にいくらかお金をもらったので、今度の日曜日にその店に行くのを楽しみにしています。 I get some money to birthday, I look forward to go the shop next Sunday. ---> I've got some money on my birthday, and I am excited to spend it at that clothing store next Sunday. 5)日曜日なので店はいつものように若者で混んでいます。しかし私は気にしません。※as usualとmind使用 Since it is Sunday, the store is crowded by young people as usual. But I was never mind. ---->Because it's a weekend, the store is packed with many young customers but I don't really mind it. Good luck!:-)
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かっこ内の英語を使っておねがいします。 ・私は日曜日にお気に入りの衣料品店へよく行き、必ず少なくとも一つは買います。(never fail to do) ・他の店に比べて、その店の衣服は私の好みにあっているのです。(suit ) ・ 春になったので、私はジャケットを一着新調したいです。 ・誕生日用にいくらかお金をもらったので、今度の日曜日にその店に行くのを楽しみにしています。 ・日曜日なので店はいつものように若者で込んでいます。しかし私は気にしません。(as usual,mind ) 分かるものだけおねがいします。
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