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Learning other language and culture gives us a good chance to have a new stand point (or view point) to see the whole world. Then it leads us to review own language and culture. We may say the whole process itself is one of the final ideas why we learn foreign language and culture. 一番です。先程は時間不足で申し訳ない、少しばかり拙い解説を。 1) 「持つようになる」→「give us a good chance」→「~する良い機会だ」 2) 「新しい視点を持つ」→これはそのまま「have a new stand point」「view point」 3) 「そうすることで更に」→此処は意訳して→「then it leads us to」→直訳「それが私達を~へ導く」→「そうするようになる」 4) 「見直す」→ピッタリの単語「review」 5) 「ないだろうか」→疑問文を止めて「we may say」=と言えるだろう 6) 「the whole process」→「その全ての過程」→「新しい言語と文化を学ぶ」+「自分の言語と文化を見直す」=「外国語を学ぶfinal確定的なidea考え方」 final = 勿論「最後の」の意味ではありますが、此処は「決定的な」「確定的な」、割と便利な言葉です。 idea = 「考え方」ですが、此処は「意図」「目的」の意味が込められています。 出来るだけ、平易な単語でまとめたつもりですが、如何でしょうか? 「添削」が不得意なモンで、申し訳ない。

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