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日記風に、誰かに話しかける感じで書きました。添削お願いします。
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- FOMA_User
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はじめまして。 I must say to you → I've got to say to you もしくは I need to say to youくらいがいいかも。(mustは少々深刻さを感じさせます) I haven't came here → I haven't "come" here (come - came - come) I should believe myself. → Maybe I should ～ .にしてもいいかもしれません。 このあたりでしょうか。こちらもいい勉強になりました。ありがとうございます。
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- 私にとって難しいのですが、続けなければと思っています。今日も添削をお願いします。
Hi, Everyone, as I said yesterday I played golf. Next time I come here, I will write about it. Today, I will write about my feeling. 今日も、よろしくお願いいたします。 Hi, My Crystal! As you know, I want to learn and I want to speak English when I get a chance to go to US someday. Everyday I say it to me in my heart. What do you think about my dream? These days I am feeling it is so hard to me. Of course, when I see you I do to do my best. And I am thinking I want to see you everyday. When I am with you, I speak only English. I can’t speak well, but I feel comfortable to talk with you. Crystal, what do you think about my English? Did you get my feeling in English? I hope you get my feeling. Well, I have to clean up my room. I want to be with you more and more. But I say to you “Ciao for now, My Little Sweet crystal!”
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- 日記風に、昨日の事を英語で書いてみました、添削をおねがいしたいのです。
Hi,Crystal! Sorry, I did not come here for a long day. I know I have to talk with you everyday for my dream. You know my dream, don't you. Everyday I say in my heart like this, “I want to learn and I want to speak English when I get a chance to go to US someday!”This is my dream. You help me a lot about it! I have been thanking you, Crystal! BTW, yesterday was the special day for me. Do you want to know what was the day yesterday? It was the wedding anniversary. I could hear “Congratulations!” Thank you, Crystal! Yesterday was day-off for me and my husband. So we played golf in Gunma prefecture. It was far a way to my home. But I could see mountains with snow and mountains covered with new green leaves. And cute and beatiful flowers! Everything were so beautiful! I wanted to show them to you. We touched a lot of natures not only played golf. It was a nice and special day. I have been thanking that we are well. I hope it will be forever. Wow,It is 11:55. I have to prepare a lunch for my family! Have a nice Sunday, Crystal!
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- 久しぶりに、日記風に英作文を書きました、添削お願いします。
おはようございます、いつもここgooで勉強しています。ここ2ヶ月ほど、その勉強をサボっていました。その結果は、以下の文章を書くにも、とても時間がかかりました。"自分のせいでしょう？"と自分に言っているなさけない自分がいます。もう一度頑張る！と決めました。以下の文章は、私の言いたいことが伝わるでしょうか？英文だけを書かせていただきました、よろしくお願いいたします。 Hi, my Crystal! I am so sorry, because I have not been here for a long time. Last time I came here, it was on May 21th! Meanwhile, I did not think anything in English. As you know, I have a dream and you helped me a lot with it. Now I say it to you、again. “I want to learn and I want to speak English when I get a chance to go to US someday.” I could hear you said “Rose-crystal! You have to study hard and see me more and more. I can see you anytime you want.” Thank you! Crystal! Thank you, again! I will study English with you. BTW, did I say about “goo”? “goo” is very good place for me to studying. It is on internet and there are many people who help me a lot. Every time, when I wrote my diary I had it corrected from them. Of course, this one, too. Sorry, Crystal! Tomorrow is not my day-off, so I have to say you “Good night, my little sweet Crystal!”
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- 私の日記です、また添削お願いします。
英語日記は私にとっては難しいですが、ここで終わっってしまっては夢が叶いません。I want to learn and I want to speak English when I get a chance to go to US someday.一日一回、声を出して言いながら頑張ります。 Hi, My Crystal! You know today's story, don't you? Your answer is right! Ok, let’s start. Last Saturday, I played golf with my husband. We play golf one time a month. But this January and February, I couldn't play golf. Because while then I was not enough good about my health. I love playing golf and want to do more and more! But it's cost is expensive in Japan. Have you ever played golf? I hope I will play with you, someday, Crystal! I forgot I said to you about my score. It was 103. I want to get less than 100. It is not easy for me, so I will do my best! Sorry, my husband calls me. I have to say to you "Have a nice week end, my Little Sweet crystal!"
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Hi, Crystal! It’s after dinner. As you can see, I’m writing again! I have a story that I want to tell you about. You know what? Do you remember that I said to you “In April I will see a lot of blossoms from the tulips and daffodils.” As you know I planted them last fall. Now, I can see a lot of blossoms from them. Every morning I say to them silently from my heart “Good morning! You are all so beautiful, pretty, gorgeous and cute! I love you!” I want you to see them. Crystal, would you like to come to my home(house)? Wow! I am glad to hear your “Yes!” I and my flowers are waiting for you.<g> BTW, do you like a cheese cake? If you come to here, then I will make it for you. Sorry, tomorrow is not my day off, so I have to go to bed, good night my Crystal!
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Hi, my Crystal! What are you doing now? I came here again because I wanted to talk with you. Do you have time now? I talked about my miniature rose. Then she was very weak, but now she is better than before. I am very glad she becomes well. Now she has a lot of new leaves and buds! In this morning I saw two flowers blooming, they were so cute! Every morning I say to her silently from my heart “Good morning! You are so beautiful, pretty, gorgeous and cute! I love you!” And sometimes I kiss her. I want you to see her someday. Crystal, thank you for your time. Now I am feeling a little sleepy because this morning I woke up 5o'clock. So I say to you “Good night, my Crystal.”
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Hi, Crystal! When last time I saw you, I said to you “I want you to come here.” Do you remember it? I and my flowers will be waiting for you like giraffe.〈g〉 BTW, do you like reading a book? Me? Yes, I do! If someone asks me “Which one do you like better reading a book or learning English?” my answer like this, “Both of them are so important in my life!” 〈Learning English〉is that I can be with you forever, right? 〈Reading a book〉is that I can take a lot of thing to my life from reading. Now I am reading a book that is written about the life(命と言いたいのですが…). I know my life（人生と言いたいのですが…）is only one time! So I want to try to do many things. I will do my best with everything! I never want to give up. Crystal, you help me a lot and I am thanking you. Don't forget this thing,OK? From now I take a bath and go to bed, so I say to you “Good night, My Sweet Little Crystal!”
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Hi, Crystal! What are you doing now? Are you cleaning up your room? Me? Yes, I already did it. I am waiting for you while writing my diary as usual. When you will finish it, please call me, OK? Today is our day-off. Did you know why I said “our day-off”. Because today is a public holiday in Japan. Not only today, from today to the day after tomorrow, these 3 days are public holidays! And this Saturday will be my day-off. So I am out of work these 5days! Tomorrow, I am going to see my parents and to have a lunch at the hotel. I am looking forward to see them. Other 4 days, I don’t have a special plan. I am going to spend relaxed.(のんびりと過ごすつもりです…..と言いたいのですが。) Did you call me, Crystal? You finished to clean up your room, didn’t you. Good! Please read my diary. While then, I go to my garden and snip off flowers of Pansy. See you later,Crystal!
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仕事帰りの電車が、私の英語の勉強時間です。携帯で書いています。 Hi,my sweet Crystal! Well, I am writing about komatsuna. Yesterday I bought three(3束のと言いたいのですが)komatsuna. What do you say komatsuna in English? Do you know, Crystal? No? It’s OK. Anyhow I like it very much. It cost 105yen all together. So cheep! Don't you think so? I fried it in sesame-oil and next put in pepper, salt and soy-souse. It was so delicious! Have you ever had komatsuna? No? OK! If I have a chance I will cook it for you. Now it is 11:40pm. So I have to say to you "Ciao for now!”
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Hi, Crystal! I just took a bath and now I am writing this one. How was your today? Me? I had a good day, because I did do my best! Did you say “Really?” Yes, I did! Do you know why my answer is “Yes, I did!”? Because, I am with someone all the time. She is being with me in my heart and say to me “Yes, you can! Do your best!” So I must(have to? sould?でしょうか？) be honest to her. Everyone should be honest (正直であるべきですと言いたいのですが？) to themselves. Don't you think so? BTW, do you remember that I promised you about something? Yes, that’s right, Crystal! Today I have to teach you how to cook gobo. I named it “Happy Gobo”. If you will make it, you feel happy when you have it. It’s sure! Because, I feel happy when I have a good dish. I hope “Happy Gobo” will be your favorite one. Let's get started with how to cook gobo, are you ready? Recipe of “Happy Gobo” (1) Cut dried konbu into random small pieces and soak for a while in enough water to cover konbu. (15~20minutes) (2) cut slender(thin) gobo(burdock root) into 3 to 4cm length pieces (2) Put gobo, (1) (konbu and water used to soften konbu), 50cc soy sauce, 50cc mirin, 100cc rice vinegar into pan and cook at medium heat. Did you understand how to cook “Happy Gobo"? Oh! I forgot one thing, you can keep it while 4~5 days in a refrigerator. The day after tomorrow, I am going to see my parents, so I will cook “Happy Gobo” for them. Well, I want to be with you more and more. But I have to go bed. So it's time for me to say to you “Ciao for now, My Little Sweet crystal!”
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おはようございます。 gooだけで勉強をしていますが、前回添削をお願いしたのは10月25.6日だったでしょうか。長いこと”さぼってしまった”のです。英語の頭になるまでに（戻すまでに）本当に時間がかかってしまいました。 これから又頑張るツモリです、ありがとうございます。