Is it Time for Society to Accept Euthanasia?
- Society should accept euthanasia as an option for those who wish to end their life without pain.
- Choosing how one dies should be a fundamental right, and euthanasia allows individuals to have that choice.
- While euthanasia may be considered a form of murder, it brings happiness to those who choose it.
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90語自由英作文添削をお願いいたします。 http://okwave.jp/qa/q6889133.html の書きなおしです。 よろしくおねがいします。 添削をお願いいたします。 志望は早稲田政経です。 文法的観点、論理的観点 ともにアドバイスをお待ちしております。 [Q]Write a paragraph explaining your opinion. Give at least one appropriate reason to support your answer. "It is time for society to accept euthanasia（安楽死）." ［A］ I agree with this opinion. You should have the option of choosing euthanasia. Some people may desire to be alive as long as possible, but others may want to end their life without pain. You should have the right to choose how to die. It is true that euthanasia is a kind of murders. But this murder never hurt anyone. On the contrary, this murder makes many people happy. To sum up, there are good reasons to condone euthanasia.
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とでもよく出来ています。90語の短いエッセィは難しいですね。 But this murder never hurt anyone. On the contrary, this murder makes many people happy.の文はちょっと書き換えてみました。However, terminally ill people choose this option to die in dignity by consulting with family members and doctors and done it under strict legal safeguards. こうすると小学６年くらいの英語が中学２年くらいになりました。 without painを but without excruciating painとかbut unbearable sufferingなどと書き換えたほうが良いとおもいます。ちょうど90語です。英語はあまり出来ないのでただ参考としてください。もっと良い回答がくるのを望んでいます。 I agree with this opinion. We should have the option of choosing euthanasia. Some people may desire to be alive as long as possible, but others may want to end their life but without excruciating pain. We should have the right to choose how to die. It is true that euthanasia is a kind of murder. However, terminally ill people choose this option to die in dignity by consulting with family members and doctors and done it under strict legal safeguards. To sum up, there are good reasons to condone euthanasia.
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- ca-jp
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追加--- euthanasia is a kind of murders のmurdersは単数にmurderすべきせすね。
- english_hour
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I agree with this opinion. We should have the option of choosing euthanasia. Some people may desire to be alive as long as possible, but others may want to end their life without pain. We should have the right to choose how to die. It is true that euthanasia is a kind of murders. But this murder never hurts anyone. On the contrary, this murder makes many people happy. To sum up, there are many good reasons to condone euthanasia. 一番気になったのは、Youが使われていること。Weでしょう。それから３単現のｓが何箇所か抜けていること。
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一般人称はyouで書くよう指導されています。。。
- B-juggler
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他のところにあげた質問を、こちらにあげるのは・・・ と、思ったけど、同じ質問だからまずいのかなぁ？？ ちょっと気になったのだけど、 「誰も傷つけない殺人」ってある？ しかもそれが人に幸せをもたらすかな？ ちょっと辛口だけど、「安楽死」って痛みを伴わないようにやるものなの？ 治る見込みがない場合でもあるんじゃない？ ＞You should have the option of choosing euthanasia. こういう選択肢も付けておいたほうがいい と言うような意味ですよね。 言いたいことは。 ＞You should have the right to choose how to die. どう死ぬか？ というのは選ぶ権利がある と言っていらっしゃるよね。 ＃どっちか片一方でもいいと思うんだけどね ぱっと気になったのはこれぐらいかな？ σ(・・*)はなんか読んでいて、あまりいい気分じゃないかな？ ｓｈｏｕｌｄ ｈａｖｅ を使うのなら ｗｉｌｌ 入れたら？ あんまり参考にならないと思うけど。 ｍ（＿ ＿）ｍ
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ありがとうございました。率直なご意見で参考になりました・
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