子どもたちの困難と親の心配：英文添削依頼
- 子どもたちの学校生活や普段の生活での困難と、親の心配について説明します。
- 彼女が思う通りにならないと攻撃的になることや、他の子が一方的に話すこと、触られることを嫌がることについて述べます。
- 私が子どもたちとその家族との関わりの中で学んだ２つの重要なことについて話します。
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添削お願いします。 文章の途中なのでわかりにくいかと思いますが・・・ <書きたい文章> もしあることが彼女の思う通りにならなれけば、彼女は攻撃的になってしまいます。 ほかの一人は、一方的にしゃべっています。 また、ほかの子は触られることをとても嫌います。 私はこれらのこどもやその家族と関わる中で、あらためて２つのことを学びました。 ひとつめは、こどもたちは学校生活や普段の生活でたくさんの困難を抱えていることです。 ふたつめは、彼らの親は彼らのたくさんの困難を本当に心配しており、いろいろなことを試しているということです。 If a certain thing doesn't become as she thinks, she would become aggressive. Another one of them talks one- sidely. Another child is very unpleasant in touching. During I relation with these children and the family, I learnt two things again. The first is that children have a lot of troubles in their school life and usual life. The second is that their parents really worry about a lot of their difficulties, and the trial and error is repeated.
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> 「家族と関わる」についてですが、この文章は実際に私が経験したことを > もとに書いています。その場合はrelationでいいのでしょうか？ relation は名詞なので、質問者さんの表現はそのままでは使えません。 また、日本語でも「かかわりを通して」「かかわりの結果として」という表現がありますが、その場合「その期間だけ」「その間だけ」という、duringという単語とはつながりが悪いと思います。 従って、Throughout my relationship with those people,や With my experience delt with those people, などの表現ができると思います。 最後になりますが、どうも読み間違いがあったようで、質問者さんの表現はtroubleやdifficultiesにもかかわらず、私は problem についてクドクド述べてしまいました。 ここの文面ではtroublesでもdifficultiesでも十分成立します。 ただ、子供のtroublesと親が感じている子供のdifficultiesは同じことを述べているようですから、どちらかに統一してはいかがでしょうか。
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A girl tends to be offensive when things go against what she would expect. Another child likes one-side conversation. And, another child tends to feel unpleasant when touched by others. Throughout the observation of those children and their family, I’ve re-confirmed the following two circumstances: The first is that children have many challenges at school or in their daily life. Secondly, their parents are very concerned with those challenges and have taken a process of trial and error. Aggressive は「積極的」という意味もあるので、ネガティブな意味を含めてここの文面ではoffensiveのほうが良いと思います。 また子供の態度の「傾向」について述べているので、英文では tend やlikeを加えてはどうでしょうか？ 「家族と関わる」という表現でrelationを使われていますが、直接関係があるわけではなく、単に調査・研究をされた結果を述べてらっしゃるのでしょうから、observation もしくはresearchという単語の方が的確だと思います。 私の英文では「困難」の表現にchallengeを使っています。 Problemは本来「かなりの問題」で、解決することがほとんど困難な問題 （例えば法を犯した、取り返しのつかない、など）の意味を伴いますから、努力して何とかなるのであれば、英文ではchallengeを使うのが無難です。 最後の「いろいろなことを試している」という表現は意味が取り図らいですね。 「解決策を探している」と意味で、are looking for a solutionでも良いかもしれません。 以上、ご参考まで。
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「家族と関わる」についてですが、この文章は実際に私が経験したことをもとに書いています。 その場合はrelationでいいのでしょうか？
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