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以下の自己紹介の文を言葉づかいや英文法を直していただけませんか ありがとうございます。 I am very happy to introduce myself. My name’s Nakajima. I'm from Tokyo. I live in Seto city and I am a university's student in the second year. I was born in Tokyo province in the central of Japan. There are 5 peoples in my family. Parents, brother, sister and me. My father is a saraly man and my mother is housewife. She always takes good care of my family. When I have a free time, I often listen to the music, watch TV, read newspapers and go shopping. On sunday, I usually go to the cafeteria to chat with my friend in the morning. And I always join the English speaking club to improve my speaking skill in the afternoon. I like learning english very much. I have learnt for years at high school and university . but my english is not enough to communication. Therefore, I try my best to learn it now. And I hope i can speak english well one day. I want to be a doctor in the future. My dream is becoming a good husband, having a good wife and pretty childrens . In short, I am really happy with my life. Of course I am going to make it happier and more meaningful.


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たくさん書きましたね~。 質問者さまのことがとてもよく分かるし、 とてもいい自己紹介文だと思います☆ このままでも十分伝わるとは思うのですが、 文法的に私が気づいたところをいくつか 1行目 name's Nakajima → name is Nakajima 代名詞+ is の時だけ短縮形になります。 2行目 university's student→ university student 's なしで大丈夫です。 3行目 peoples → people people 自体が複数形なので、s はいらないです。 4行目 salary man → works for a company サラリーマンは和製英語らしいです。 下から7行目 learnt → learnt it learnt は後ろに「~を」が必要です。 下から6行目 not enough → not good enough enough は前に形容詞が必要です。 下から6行目 try my best → try to do my best do one's best で、最善を尽くす。 文末にnow があるので、現在進行形で I am trying to do my best がベターかも。 下から5行目 i → I タイプミスでしょうか。 下から3行目 childrens → children children 自体が複数形なので s はいらないです。 でしゃばって色々と書きましたが、 どれも全然たいした間違いではないので、 あくまでもご参考まで。 お役に立てれば嬉しいです☆





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