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以前、ここで「すると」という意味について質問しました。その場合はIf so～ ではないかと回答頂いたので、文章を作ってみました。間違っていたら御指摘下さい。 明日、雨だとすると体育は中止です。 If so rainny tomorrw laundry doesn't dry. 明日友達が迎えに来なければ一人で登校しなければならない。 If so my friend doesn't come my home, I go to Junior high school alone. もっと練習していたとすれば合唱コンクールで優勝していたかもしれない。 If so more practice championship in the chorus contest.
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If it rains tomorrow, we won't have P.E. class tomorrow. If my friend doesn't come to my house(place), I will have to go to school alone. I we had practiced more, we would have won (first place) in the chorus contest. ２つ目について「学校」とは中学校だというこのようですが、日本語でもいちいち 「一人で中学校に登校しなければならない」とは普通いいませんので 中学をさす「junior high school」よりは、単に「school学校」だけでも 十分だと思います。 ３つ目は「もっと練習していたならば」「優勝していただろう」ということで、 コンクールの結果が出た時点ですでに「過去」ですから、それよりも前の 練習段階は過去完了を使うべきかと思います。
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- love_pet2
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If it rains tomorrow, physical education will be called off. If one of my friends won't pick me up, I have to go to school by myself/ If we had practiced harder, we might win in the chorus competition.
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「すると」って、「もしも」って事ですか？ だったらif soよりif だけで良いと思います! if it rains tomorrow, P.E will be cancelled (?) if my friend doesnt come to my home, i will go to ～ If we practiced more, we could of won in the chorus contest. となるハズ…ですｗ ちょっと文法とか変かもしれないですけどifだけで良いかな＾＾
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