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>"I went to school and found out I was the only one who hadn't woken up to the earthquake. " をちょっと変えるべきかも。 "I went to school and found out that I was the only one who hadn't been woken up by the earthquake." "than"はリズム上、あった方がベターでしょう。 又、"hadn't been"の方が原文のニュアンスに近いと思われます。 >"When I see my friends from school, they still bring up that sometimes. " これもちょっと変えるべきかと。 "When I see my friends from school, they still bring that up sometimes." "that"を単独で使うなら、この順番の方が自然と思われます。 勿論、"they still like to bring up that story sometimes and embarrass me."とは言えますが。 カクテルの文章は問題ありません。 ご参考になれば幸いです。

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