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英語の文章を考えたのですが、どうも文法がおかしいところがあるような気がします。まだ途中なのですが、チェックをお願いします。 My favorite sport is basketball. I have played basketball for seven years. I learned many things of basketball. At first I learned “an effort and don’t give up mind” When I started playing basketball, I was not fast run other player. But I was effort little by little at elementary school. I became early than before now to run. I know that an effort and don’t give up were very important. Next, I learned by leadership. I was a captain by basketball club in junior high school. When I became a captain, there was worried. And I knew difficulty that awareness as a leader of a team gathered up a sprouting team while I practiced it. The basketball club was strong team work. Try hard serious basketball. And I played basketball well. I understood that very important with a leader “I must move at first!” When I knew it, I decide to move positively and build a relationship of mutual trust with a friend and thank that I was able to cooperate. As a result, it was able to be collected in a team. I was able to learn the leadership through club activities. I learned to cooperation as team. And I understood that it can’t only one.


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どうも、翻訳サイトの匂いがしますね。 なぜかというと、"I became early than before now to run."は、もともと「いま、走るのが以前よりはやくなってきた」のような和文だったのに、脳の無い翻訳機械が、「速い」を「早い」と間違って「fast」になるはずなのに、「early」にしてしまったようです。 中(もしくは高等)学校の生徒さんじゃないでしょうかね。(My favorite sport is basketball. I have played basketball for seven years. で、中2、3年生のレベルだけど、残念ながらそれきり文法的によい。) 自分がマースタした表現などを使って、書いてください。経験のない表現がイキナリ書けるわけじゃないのですね。 全然 助かりじゃない!と思われるかもしれないが、僕の仕事にいつも、いつもこの問題にあっています。完全にマスターしたってことをもとにして、自分の手でこの長文を書き直してみてください。よりすばらしい結果が出ると信じております。Good luck!



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    英文添削お願いします。 On October Second ‘10 I had a holiday and went to car dealer. First, I went to Toyota to see Estima. As soon as I went there, I did test-drive one. It was comfortable, but it wasn’t more comfortable Alfard and Velfire. When all of salesman find I decided to buy a car, they surve me with the greatest survice. After Toyota, I went to Honda. But there was not a car I wanted. When I was about to leave the shop, the salesman tried to prevent me from leaving there by this way and that. When I was feeling an awkward situation, my mobile phone rang at a good timing. It called from Toyota and told me to leave my bag. I left there at once and came back Toyota to receive it. As soon as I arrived at there, the salesman brought my bag to me. I felt I was lucky, as I left the shop. If I left it another place, it wouldn’t come back me.

  • この英文で通じるでしょうか?

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