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The birthrate in Japan has been decreasing . What are the mjor cases of this soc
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I can understand what you want to say, but I'm afraid there are several mistakes in your essay. (1) The birth rate in Japan is decreasing these days. ('These days' is not used in the present perfect tense.) (2) the number of women who don't get married is increasing. (The intransitive verb 'marry' usually accompanies an adverbial phrase, so 'get married' is better here.) (3) they find it much more interesting to work than to get married to raise chidren at home. (You don't have to put 'a lot of' before fun if you use 'much more'. Moreover, 'inetersting' is better than 'fun' because work isn't usually fun in itself.) (4) the number of women who they think can live by temselves are increasing. ('more and more' and 'is increasing' don't agree with each other. It is 'the number' that is increasing. The relative pronoun should be 'who' because the subject of 'can live' must be a person.) (5) the problems of dscrimination between ... compared to the past. ( 'Discrimination' is an uncoutable noun. 'Compared with' should be 'compared to.') (6) The birthrate in Japan is getting lower and lower. (We don't say the birthrate is good or bad. We say the birthrate is high or low.) Most of what you are trying to say may be undestood, but you have to be more careful about the choices of words. If you learn more about the correct usage of grammar, your essay will be much better. I hope you work harder and become more used to writing good English. I hope it helps ...
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