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なにか先を読みたいエッセイのようですね。先生が訂正を指摘しているのは、Verb agreement つまり 動詞の使い方の決まりについて。 文章は三人称単数現在ですから、 He goes there as a criminal person.で goes ですね。 分かりますか。頑張って。
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