Should gambling be banned?
- Gambling should not be banned as it provides revenue for some people.
- While there may be dangers associated with gambling, it should not be completely banned.
- Instead, it should be legalized with proper regulations and limitations.
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I think gambling should not be banned. If it is banned, some people living the revenue cannot life. Certainly there is something dangerous in any point, I think it is not to ban. As a result that it should be legalized and limit to gamble. It depends you for gambling to how to use. 文法的に間違いは無いでしょうか。なかったら暗記しようかなと思ってます。 よろしくおねがいします。
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I think gambling should not be banned. If it WERE banned, some people RELYING ON the revenue GENERATED FROM GAMBLING WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO MAKE A LIVING. Certainly, there ARE some dangerS RELATING TO GAMBLING in any point; HOWEVER, I think it SHOULD NOT BE banNED. As a result, I BELEIVE THAT GAMBLING should be legalized and ALSO SOME limitS SHOULD BE SET TO AVOID ANY DANGEROUS SITUATION TO HAPPEN. It depends ON you how to PERCEIVE GAMBLING. （これだとこねこの意見になるので、書き換えが必要ね♪） 部分的に修正したわよ♪ これでいいのかなー☆
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