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お礼読みました。答えれる範囲で答えますね。。 >hang around with となっておりますが、go around with ではいけませんでしょうか? 遊びまわるというフィーリングが弱いですしどちらかというと歩き回ると言う意味になりそうです。下記をご覧ください。 http://eow.alc.co.jp/go+aroun/UTF-8/ >in order toのところはtoではいけませんか。 いけないことはないと思います。リズムの問題ですね。 >またa great deal ofの後ろは数えられない名詞だと思うのですが,experienceにsがついてもいいのでしょうか。もしよろしければまたよろしくお願いいたします。 まず experience を単数にするか複数にするかですが、 経験をつむと言う意味なら複数が適切と思われます。夏季をご覧ください。 http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=27061&dict=CALD C(加算名詞)の experience の意味が適切で経験を多くつむと言うイメージで複数にしました。 a great deal of はsa-tooさんの英文をそのまま使っているところで、後ろに可算名詞が来ている例は一杯ありますよ。例として英国BBCのページを紹介します。一番最後の行で、プロライターの文章です。 http://www.bbc.co.uk/northernireland/learning/getwritingni/sh_kc_author.shtml あまりお礼ランをチェックしてませんが、補足質問には喜んでお答えします(できる範囲)。

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お礼

回答いただきありがとうございます。 「遊びまわる」と弱いですしどちらかというと「歩き回る」と言う意味になりそうだとのご意見ですが、「若者が夜、遊びに出かける」とか 「悪い友達と遊んでいる」などというように「つきあう」という 意味の「遊ぶ」はgo around (with somebody)と予備校の先生に習いました。 go around with somebody/go around togetheralso go about with somebody==to meet someone often and spend a lot of time with them: (longman Dictionary of contemparary English) hang aroundはinformalな表現だと習ったのです。 a great deal,a good dealにはそのような言い方があるとは考えて おりませんでした。勉強になりました。 それから、回答いただきました方から、a great deal はバイトではそこまで大きな経験がえられるというのは、誇張しすぎというご指摘も ありましたことをお伝えいたします。

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