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英文の添削を宜しくお願いします。 私は背が低い事がコンプレックスです。だからいつもヒールの高い靴を好んで履いています。 それに背が低いと視界も悪いし、高い所にも手が届きません。人から「小さいね。」と言われることも好きではないです。 I have an inferior complex about my height [ I'm very sensitive about being small.]and so I always wear high-heel shoes.[So I usually like wearing high heeled shoes.] And because of my hight, I only have low view, can't reach things that are put on high places, etc.. And I don't like poeple pointing out that I'm short.
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高校の英作文の課題なら、junglelawさんの訳の方が、一語一句正確に訳されていてベターだと思います。しかし、英語としてはギコチないですね。私の添削も これが絶対的な正解とは言えませんが、こういう訳し方もあるのだと頭の片隅にでも置いてください。私の添削は幾分 硬いかもしれませんが。 I'm worried about my short height. This lead me to prefer always waering high-heeled shoes. And beside my short height prevents me from enjoying a wide sight in addition to fetching objects placed on a high position. It goes without saying I'm afraid people mention my short height. 「complex」は日本語では日常語になっていますが、英語では心理用語の域を出ていません。sensitiveもいいんでしょうけど、「敏感」というニュアンスが強いです。それから、むやみに ただ文や節をandで繋ぐのも いかにも稚拙な文章の印象があります。それから、soなどを多用して文を繋ぐより、私の添削例のように名詞構文を使うとスッキリします。私の添削例のenjoyは 「楽しむ」という意味ではなく、「享受する」という意味です。reach thingsのthingですが、thingは 形のあるもの形のないもの全部含めて指す言葉で あまりにも漠然としているので、objectというふうに少し限定的な単語を使った方がいいでしょう。最後に afraidという単語は かなり幅広く使えますよ。
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