英文
中学生です
以下の英文の間違いを厳しく見つけてくれたら嬉しいです
実際に自力で文を作るのが上達への近道かなと思ったので実践しました
時制とかめちゃくちゃだったらすいません(;ω;)
正直、the とかもどこに入れたらいいか分かりません!
長い文になりそうだったのでストーリーも変な所でとまっています;
全部の間違いを指摘するのが面倒だったら1か所でもいいので指摘お願いします!
逆になにか質問があれば答えます。
Today, I got up 9:00 a.m. I slept for ten hours, but I was still sleepy then. I called my friend, Jim as soon as I got up because I promised to call him yesterday, but I forgot. Even though I broke my promise with him, he wasn't angry at all. It's natural for me to get angry. But I said to him ''I'll call you on time when I'll promise you without fail.'' After that I ate breakfast. I laid butter on bread. I love butter the best of all flavors (?). I love milk, too because it goes well with bread. I had to go to school, but I'd rather stay home and take it easy. I went to school on foot in a hurry. I met Kate by chance then. She is smart, and cute as well. To be honest, I wanted to go to school right off, but her story was very long.
お礼
ありがとうございます!