重要な教訓：オーストラリアでの銃規制の効果とは？
- オーストラリアでの銃規制の効果について考えると重要な教訓を得ることができる。
- 銃器を利用した暴力を制限する方法として、オーストラリアの経験は参考になる。
- オーストラリアの銃規制は実際に効果があり、他の国にも示唆を与えるものである。
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However, if we think the way of restricting violence or incidents using by gun, it could say the lesson learned from Australian experience has really important meaning. 「しかし、銃器を利用した暴力を制限する方法について考えてみると、オーストラリアの経験から得た教訓は非常に重要な意味があると言えるでしょう。」 ＊https://okwave.jp/qa/q9598600.html の続きです。 こちらの英文を添削して欲しいです。 よろしくお願いします。
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以下のとおり、語句、添削文、まとめの添削文をお答えします。 ＞However, if we think the way of restricting violence or incidents using by gun, it could say the lesson learned from Australian experience has really important meaning. ＞「しかし、銃器を利用した暴力を制限する方法について考えてみると、オーストラリアの経験から得た教訓は非常に重要な意味があると言えるでしょう。」 （語句） ＊銃器を利用した/銃器による暴力（や事故）：violence (or incidents) using gun / by gun。using gun[銃器を利用した」、もしくはby gun「銃器による」であって、using by gunとすると意味をなしません。 ＊～を制限する方法について考えてみると/考えてみるとき：if we think / when thinking about ways of restricting / limiting ～。後者がより自然です。「方法」はwaysと複数で言いましょう。「制限する」はrestrictingでもlimitingでもいいと思います。 ＊オーストラリアの経験から得られた教訓：the lessons learned from the Australian experience。「教訓」lessonsもやはり複数形がいいと思います。 ＊非常に重要な意味を持つ/非常に重要である：have really important meaning / are very important。主語lessonsの複数形に呼応して動詞はそれぞれhave / areですね。 ＊～と言えるでしょう/言えるかも知れません：it can / could be said that ～。couldの方が幾分、推量の意味合いが強くなります。（なお、受身文で言わない場合は、it could sayよりはwe could sayとする方がいいでしょう。） （添削文） However, if we think / when thinking about ways of restricting / limiting violence (or incidents) using gun / by gun, it can / could be said that the lessons learned from the Australian experience have really important meaning / are very important. 《しかし、銃器を利用した/銃器による暴力（や事故）を制限する方法について考えてみると/考えてみるとき、オーストラリアの経験から得られた教訓が非常に重要な意味を持つ/非常に重要であると言えるでしょう/言えるかも知れません。》 （まとめの添削文） ⇒However, when thinking about ways of restricting violence (or incidents) by gun, it could be said that the lessons learned from the Australian experience have really important meaning. 《しかし、銃器による暴力（や事故）を制限する方法について考えてみるとき、オーストラリアの経験から得られた教訓が非常に重要な意味を持つ、と言えるかも知れません。》
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> restricting violence by gun この↑書き方では「暴力を銃で規制する」という意味になりかねませんので次のように変える方がよろしいでしょう: restricting gun violence restricting gun-related violence なお、"restricting violence (or incidents) by gun"とした場合、"violence"は「規制可能」であるとしても"incidents"を「規制する」ことはできないのではないかという問題もあるようです。
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何度も申し訳ないのですが もしよければお願いします 「慣れることによって注意がおろそかになるものだ。」 上の筆者について自分の感想、意見、経験など１００～１５０語で書きなさい I agree with this writer's idea. I like cooking , so I make a meal every day. I have confidence in using a knife because I have used it for many years. However, I sometimes cut my finger by mistake. As soon as I cut my finger , I realize that my confidence surely make me forget to be careful in cooking. When I take care, I don't cut my finger. Thus, it is very important to take care even in daily lives. From my experience, I believe that his idea is so reasonable that you have to keep it in mind.
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２０１１年度 埼玉大学 自由英作文 条件・ 成功は勤勉な努力からなし得ることであり、運は関係がない。というテーマの中で、賛成か反対かを述べ具体的な理由を挙げIながら説明しなさい。 I don't agree with this statement . I think what is important in success is hard work and luck. Not to mention , it is eccential point to work hard if there is something you want to achieve , but I think luck is more important. This is because even if you make every effort to attempt somethinｇ you want to do , it is not always successful due to something unpredicable and so on. I have an experence. I tried to enter a high school when I was junior high school student. I made every effort to pass the entrance examination , however I couldn't succeed in that. At that time I really und erstood the meaning of this word "luck is needed". Thus I think what is important in success is hard work and "luck". (130字） 添削をお願いできる方がいなくて困ってます。どなたかお願いできますでしょうか。文法を中心に添削して下さるとありがたいです。厳しい意見をお願いします。
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ご回答ありがとうございます。 以前のご指摘と同じようにlessonsと複数形にするのがいいのですね。 またhas ではなくhaveなんですね。 詳しくご説明していただきありがとうございます。 参考になりました。