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添削してください。 テーマ:思い出 (何が起きて、なぜその思い出があなたにとって大切なのか書きなさい。) One day,I received the math mini-test which had held the other day and felt shocked at the law score.That’s why I asked my friend,who is cleverer than any other student,why couldn’t I pass the test :for at that time I had assumed that the score depends on our own talent.Listened to me,he immediately answered “Only you were lazy.”This word had a great influence on me.If it were not for his word and the memory,I wouldn’t know how important making effort is now.
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「補足コメント」を拝見しました。 白状すると、実は私も、“You are too lazy!”と言われる口でした。 (^o^!) ＞ちょっと気になってしまったのですが、こういった添削をしてくださる方というのは、やはり英語の資格などを取られてる方なのでしょうか？ ⇒学生のころ、（英語専攻ではありませんでしたが）資格は２つほど取りました。ただし、自慢できるほどのものではありません！ とはいえ、そのおかげで、院生時代に高校英語科の非常勤講師を経験して、とても楽しかったという記憶が残っています。
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以下のとおりお答えします。 ＞One day,I received the math mini-test which had held the other day and felt shocked at the law score.That’s why I asked my friend,who is cleverer than any other student,why couldn’t I pass the test :for at that time I had assumed that the score depends on our own talent.Listened to me,he immediately answered “Only you were lazy.”This word had a great influence on me.If it were not for his word and the memory,I wouldn’t know how important making effort is now. ＊お書きの文章そのものを添削すれば、次のようになります。（カンマやピリオドの後は1字分空けます。） ⇒The other day I took a math mini-test, which resulted bad, too bad! I felt shocked at the low score. That’s why I asked my friend, who is cleverer than any other student, "Why couldn’t I pass the test?" At that time I assumed that the score depended on our own talent. On listening to me, he (immediately) answered me, “Only you were lazy.” This word had a great influence on me. If it were not for his word, now I wouldn’t know how important making effort is. ＊しかしこれでは、失礼ながら内容が貧弱過ぎると思います。「怠けていただけ」とか「努力することが重要」という表現をもって「大切な思い出」とするには、何とも「お寒い」限りです。せめて、次のような内容をお勧めします。（勝手に書き換えてみますので、お気に召さない場合はどうぞ無視なさってください。） ⇒The other day I took a math quiz, but the result was worst. Knowing the result, I was shocked. Oh, my God! So I asked my friend who is cleverer than any other student around me. "Why can not I get a good score, how can I improve my grades?" He answered promptly. "It's because you are only trying to get units, and because you are not interested in the subject matter of the course. You need to be more interested. The subjects you learned with interests will surely get better grades." I woke up. "Yes, indifference was the very worst enemy!" ＝先日私は数学の小テストを受けたが、その成績は最悪であった。その結果を知って、私は愕然とした。それで、私は周囲の誰より優秀な友人に尋ねた。「なぜ私はいい点数を取れないのだろうか。どうしたら成績を上げられるだろうか」と。彼は即座に答えた。「ただ単位だけを取ろうとするからだ。学習科目の内容に関心がないからだ。もっと興味を持つことが必要だ。興味を持って学んだ科目は必ず成績が上がるよ」。私は目が覚めた。「そうか、無関心がまさに最悪の敵だったのだ！」。
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ご丁寧な解説ありがとうございます！ ちょっと気になってしまったのですが、こういった添削をしてくださる方というのは、やはり英語の資格などを取られてる方なのでしょうか？