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質問

I will be transfer to another company from next month.Then, I had a frist meeting (interview) yesterday. I was so nervous while the meeting because the interviewere were 4 people, Department manager, Manager and Cheaf ... ( I can't understand how to say Bucho-, Kacho-, Syunin in English.. ??? There are almost same saying expression, and I'm a little confused about it..)

They asked me what I have been experienced at work so I've explained what I have done there. My experience job on trading is not so difficult. It is only documentation for clearance. That's it.

However, there are a lot of to do work not only documentation but also exportation all cordinate. It must be harder than in the past. Of course it needs English skill. I need to brush up my speaking and writting. Hope it will be better in my day-to-day work.

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回答No.4

00ib13 · ベストアンサー

後で気がついたのですが、下の回答の部分が違っていました。
申し訳ありませんが、訂正させてください。

（誤）There were a lot of～

(正）There was a lot of～

お礼

ありがとうございます。とても参考になりました。また機会があればお願いしますm(__)m

回答No.3

00ib13

続きです。

However, there are a lot of to do work not only documentation but also exportation all cordinate.
> But, there were a lot of paper-work for me to do. I also had to work on other things, such as ...
原文の意味がわからないので、事務のほかに何をしなければならなかったのか？

It must be harder than in the past.
> この文の意味がわかりません。

Of course it needs English skill.
> 前後の関係からなぜOf courseがあるのかわかりません。itはI でしょうか？

I need to brush up my speaking and writting.
> I need to practice my English in speaking and writing.
brush upは、英語の実力が割りとある場合に、さらに磨きをかけるという場合に使います。

Hope it will be better in my day-to-day work.
>　I hope I will improve my English while working at new company.
I am hoping～でもいいです。

回答No.2

00ib13

長くなるのでわけました。
この文では、自分の意思というより、誰かに仕事先を変えさせられた（transferを使っているので）と理解できますが．．

I will be transfer to another company from next month.
> I will be transferred to another company next month.

Then, I had a frist meeting (interview) yesterday.
> I had the first interview yesterday with my new employers.

I was so nervous while the meeting
> I was so nervous during the interview

because the interviewere were 4 people,
> because there were four people to interview me,

Department manager, Manager and Cheaf ... ( I can't understand how to say Bucho-, Kacho-, Syunin in English.. ??? There are almost same saying expression, and I'm a little confused about it..)
> (I don't know exactly how to call their titles in English.)

They asked me what I have been experienced at work so I've explained what I have done there.
> They asked me about my job experience and I told them what I had done at my previous work place.

My experience job on trading is not so difficult.
> My job there was not very difficult.

It is only documentation for clearance. That's it.
> It was mostly clerical work.
Nothing special.

回答No.1

Deerhunter

大意は通じるレベルになっていると思います。日本語で何を表現したいのか明確に把握できない部分があるので、憶測で判断しました

I will be working for another company...　転職ですね？
I had a first interniew... 面接ですね？
so nervous at the meeting... while は後に主語動詞がきます

because there were four interniewers, Department maganer .... 役職はいろいろ言い方がありますので、選択の問題のことが多いです

what I have experienced at work. ここでピリオドです

I have done in my previous company.

I told them that I did not find my task in trading challanging enough 業務が簡単すぎて物足りなかった？

because it only involed documentation for clearing customs.

However there are a lot more work that could have been done other than documantation.

Those tasks would have been difficult for me to handle a few years ago. 昔の自分には難しかったろう

I hope my English will gradually improve as I keep working.

表現方法はいろいろあると思いますので、なるべく原文に即して直してみました。

お礼

ありがとうございます。とても参考になりました^^