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カバーレターの添削お願いします。
カバーレターを作ったのですが、恐縮ですが文法の間違い、フォーマルな言い回しなど何でもいいです。多分、間違いが多いと思うのですが、教えてもらえたらと思います。よろしくお願いします。 March 23, 2005 To whom it may concern, Please accept this letter and the enclosed information the truck driver position. I am currently seeking employment in the Vancouver area. My past experience working is also truck driver. It was 2 ton size. And I had delivered mostly food and grocery to our company members. My customers was about 400 peoples, My working was not only delivered, also response customer complaint, inducement to get new customer and more. I had a reputation for being polite to customers from my boss and my customers. This is for not only business, I really like to talk with people. In consequence it made work out. I think so. I have a cooperativeness with other working and I’d like to work with serious and fun. I am confident about drive however I always pay attention about to be overconfidence while driving. And I definitely understand my English skill is not good, I am learning now, so please be forewarned. I think I will be good worker who can contribute to your company. Thank you very much for reading this letter. I look forward to your reply. Sincerely,
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To whom it may concern /with/ Please accept this letter and the enclosed information /about/ the truck driver position. I am currently seeking /work/(employment) in the Vancouver area. March 23, 2005 To whom it may concern /with/, Please accept this letter and the enclosed information /about/ the truck driver position. I am currently seeking /work or job/(employment) in the Vancouver area. My past (experience working) /work-experience/ is also /on/ truck driver. It was 2 ton/s/ in weight(size). And I /have/(had) (delivered mostly) /mostly delivered/food and grocery to our company members. My customer(s) was of about 400 peoples(,)/./ My work(ing) was not only (delivered) /delivery/, /but/also /the/ response /to/ customer/'s/ complaint/s/, inducement to get new customer/s/ and more. I had a reputation for being polite to customers from my boss and my customers. This is (for) not only /for/ business, but I really like to talk with people. In consequence it /was effective/(made work out). I think so. I (have a cooperativeness with other working)/am friendly with the other workers/ and (I’d) /I/ like to work (with) /both with/ (serious) /seriousness/ and (fun)/easyness/. I am confident (about drive)/with my driving,/ however I /am/ always (pay)/paying/ attention (about) to (be)/being/ (overconfidence)/overconfident/ while (my) driving. (And) I (definitely) understand /definitely that/ my English skill is not /so/ good(,)/./ I am learning /English/ now, so please (be forewarned)/look foreward/. I think I will be /a/ good worker who can contribute to your company. Thank you very much for reading this letter. I look forward to your reply /soon/. Sincerely, 分かるとこだけやってみました。ほんのご参考までに。。
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- wednesday11
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"To whom it may concern" は「関係各位」という意味ですので、 カバーレターに使うのはまずいんじゃないかな。 取引関係のない企業間の文書である リファレンスレターにはよく使われますが。 普通は "Dear Sirs," です。
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なるほど！わかりました。 訂正して書いてみます。 ありがとうございました。
- mia_jade
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March 23, 2005 To whom it may concern, Please accept this letter and the enclosed information for the truck driver position. I am currently seeking an employment in Vancouver area. My past working experience includes driving a 2 ton truck, delivering mostly food and groceries to our customers. I was responsible for delivering for 400 customers and I also took care of claims from our customers, and the custom development. Both my customers and my boss complimented me for being polite. I owe this compliment to my personality - I really enjoy talking with people. I am also cooperative with coworkers and I take work seriously but I don't forget to have fun in what I do. I am confident about my skill as a driver, however I always try to better my current skill. As to my English skill, although it isn't very good yet, I am trying my best to learn the language. I am also confident that you will find me a good worker who can contribute to your company. Thank you very much for your consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you on your convenience. Sincerely, こんな感じでどうでしょうか?? 少し変えたところもありますが原則原文に忠実にしてあるつもりです。
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早々とありがとうございます！ 参考になります。
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