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1. passionate で良いと思います。「熱意をもって（指導していた）」というようなニュアンスになります。 2. 「ダンス指導」はシンプルに teaching dance でもよいと思います。Giving dancing lessons の方が良いかも知れません。 3. 「～にも」が抜けているので、as well を入れる必要があります。 4. 「ダンス指導にも」なのか「演技指導にも」なのか質問文から判断できません。 「彼はダンス指導にも力を入れていた」 He was passionate about giving dancing lessons as well. 「彼は演技指導にも力を入れていた」 He was passionate about giving acting lessons as well.
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英語の再勉強中です。 英文を作成しましたので添削をお願いします。 There was also an affair today. Of course, that result was our big boss. After our boss reported his work to him, he took a joke, ‘the man who gave me this info told me that this is so expensive.’ This word aroused him and yelled. Then he himself called on the man who said it and clamed about it like child in the presence of us. It was really unbelievable scene. There is a problem wherever he is.
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Kyaaaa so cute! LOL he sings it better than I xD definitely loves him when he was asked 'Owacchau?' And continues to dance until the end! 短文でお恥ずかしいのですがよろしくお願い致しますm(＿＿)m
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複雑な構文で、自信がありません。 以下引用； Her curiosity about the environmental protection group he'd claimed to be a volunteer researcher for had been so intense and so unrelenting that first he'd told her it was merely a minor part of his life,not as important as she'd at first thought, that he he was mostly a diving instructor out on Long Island. １；彼が有志で調査員をつとめていると自称した環境保護団体への彼女の傾倒は激しくゆるぎないものであったので、彼は最初に、調査員は単なる人生のちいさな一部であり、より重要なのは、彼女の当初の考え通り、生業であるロングアイランドでのダイビング指導であることを、彼女に告げておいた。 ２；彼が有志で調査員をつとめていると自称した環境保護団体への彼女の傾倒は激しくゆるぎないものであったので、彼は、それが彼女が当初思っているようなものではなく単なる人生のちいさな一部であり、生業はロングアイランドでのダイビング指導員であることを、最初に彼女に告げた。 ３；その他（１も２もまちがっている） よろしくおねがいいたします。
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英文を訳して頂きたいですm(＿＿)m 短文でお恥ずかしいのですが、わかる方がいらっしゃいましたら訳して頂きたいですm(＿＿)m 私の子供がダンスをしている動画（ちょろちょろ私の所に来る子供に私が「終わっちゃうよ～」と声をかけてる動画です＾＾；） を拝見した外国の方からコメントを頂いたのですが、何となくしか分からず、細かく知りたいです。 LOLやxDが全く分かりません。 よろしくお願い致しますm(＿＿)m Kyaaaa so cute! LOL he sings it better than I xD definitely loves him when he was asked 'Owacchau?' And continues to dance until the end!
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The Green Mile This movie was released in 1996, and it was nominated for four Academy Award. (Best Supporting Actor, Best Picture, Best Sound, and Best Adapted Screenplay ) The title means road to the electric chair. The scene of this story is on death row in the 1930. 1930 year was an age of serious great depression in the United States. One day, a new inmate arrives. His name is John Coffey who is 7-foot-tall , and black male. He convicted of raping and killing two young Girls. At first sight, John Coffey seems very ferocious, but actual John is gentle giant. Sometimes he cries, because he afraid of darkness. Surely most audience think he is not man who can murder young girls. However he was found by police holding corpse. In fact he has extraordinary healing powers, who reveals by healing warder’s urinary tract infection and resurrecting a mouse. When John is asked to explain his power, he merely says that he "took it back. On that day John defy to care girls. John is innocence. Regrettably, John was sentenced to death, so he can’t escape to death penalty. The director have much concern with John’s initial. John’s initial is the same Jesus Christ. John was modeled on god. He tried to save the human, but he was killed by human. His life resembles Jesus Christ. He had said I was tired before it died. Perhaps god thought so too. This film picks up the problem of race, and false accusation. John’s lawyer conceive a prejudice against black man. The lawyer thought Black man is the same as dog. He said even if it is usually obedient, that might bite us suddenly. This idea was general in 1930. It is not an exaggeration to say that discrimination to the black executed John. In the last scene, a hero says everyone walks in a green mile of the life. He was 108 years old now, but there is no person who lives a long life in this age. He was helped his sick by John, but he couldn’t save John from electric chair. He probably received John’s life when he was helped. But he thinks his long life is visitation. The prisoner wants to live more, but warder who enforces the death sentence hopes for the death. It is the sarcastic one. 映画「グリーンマイル」についての文です。 わからないところはエキサイト翻訳を使ったので、変なところがあると思います・・・。 でも自分ではそれが変なのかわからなくて困っています。 添削お願いします！
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下記の英文の添削をお願い致します。 When I got up in the morning,I felt srtange atomoshere. I noticed my oclock aram did not go off.I had to go now. but I wanted to have a breakfast.I asked by myself what sholud I do. I made a decition I have a breakfast puickly. If I skip a breakfast,I feel bad and somthing happen during a class. so I think my decition was correct. As a result,I could get to the school on time. Morning class I studied about a fairlytale especially little red riding hood . the fairytale is called AKAZUKINTOOOKAMI in Japan. first,I talked about the import of this story in own country. Among stories is a little different. Second,We listened to another story on youtube I tell you about the story of summary. When The wolf hanged on in forest,he finded one house which a grandmather live.He is hugrry so he tyied to eat her.He came into her house and eat her up!He knew a liitle girl is coming.He waited for her in the house. A littl girl came into the house and met him.She did not realized he is wolf.she said,What great big eyes you have.He replied,All the better to see you with. but she came up with idea he has cool fury so I want the fury. she has guns and shout him.He was dead. She made a fury coat out of wolf slkin. She said,Hell,and do please note my lovely furry coat. I finished made up a story. but I worked with classmate that she ignored to me. I could not stand over again but I can not be helped. I think I am the worst level in this class.I can not speak English very well. Evening class We talked about heart. I think It is difficult to explain heart.It is depend on person. but We couled talk about having heart ot heart. After school I went to the Oxford Circe which is famous for shopping road. I bought some underwear which is Small size and a T-shirts, I was filld up satisfaction. At dinner My host mother told me about a tommorow's dinner. A familly is going to come home at dinner time and have a dinner with us. I feel complax and better at the same time. I can talk person who is diffrent usual but I do not have confedence. I think I lose my confidence tomorrow.
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すみません。 日本語と英文があっていませんでしたね。（演技指導とダンス指導） 確認不足でした。申し訳ないです。 分かり難かった人も関わらず、両方のパターンを記載していただきありがとうございます。 teachingを使えばいいのですね。納得です。 回答ありがとうございました！！