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Various kinds of business thinking how we do and get successful. 多くのビジネスはどのようにすれば成功できるか考えている。 to importance of to experience many things たくさん経験する大切さ We should to experience many things to success わたし達は成功するためにたくさん経験を積む(経験する)べきだ。 I was mumber in the basketball club when I was junior high school student, but I wanted to be basketball player. 中学生のころ、バスケ部に所属していたが、バスケット選手になりたいわけではなかった。 I could learn someting such as relationship of trust with fellow and the mind of don't give up finally. 私は、仲間との信頼関係や最後まであきらめない心などを学べた。 Even if it is not relevent directly for my dream but it became very important experience for my life. たとえ、それが直接私の夢に関係なかったとしても、わたしの人生にとってはとても大切な経験になった 間違っているところや、アドバイスなどがあれば教えてください。 よろしくお願いします。

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be 動詞なしで進行形にしようとする癖がおありのようです。それから a/an とか the とかの冠詞が全て抜けています。冠詞を理解するのは時間をかけてゆっくり勉強すればいいので、今はそれほど気にしなくていいです。 Various kinds of business thinking how we do and get successful. A lot of businesses are thinking how to get successful. to importance of to experience many things the importance of experiencing many things We should to experience many things to success should などの助動詞のあとは動詞の原型が来る。不定詞ではない。success は名詞。ここに来るのは動詞。"get successful" とか "be successful" とか "succeed" ならOK。 We should experience many things to get successful. I was mumber in the basketball club when I was junior high school student, but I wanted to be basketball player. 中学生のころ、バスケ部に所属していたが、バスケット選手になりたいわけではなかった。 mumber → member basketball club → basketball team 英文の方を読むとバスケット選手になりたかったと言っている。バスケ部に所属していても実際にプレイしていたかどうかは不明。 I belonged to a junior high school basketball team, but I had no intention of becoming a basketball player. I could learn someting such as relationship of trust with fellow and the mind of don't give up finally. 私は、仲間との信頼関係や最後まであきらめない心などを学べた。 仮定法にも使える could を使うと「学ぼうと思えば学べたが学ばなかった」みたいなニュアンスも出て来ます。 someting → something I was able to learn the importance of trusting relationships and not giving up till the end. Even if it is not relevent directly for my dream but it became very important experience for my life. たとえ、それが直接私の夢に関係なかったとしても、わたしの人生にとってはとても大切な経験になった relevent → relevant 「仲間との信頼関係」「最後まであきらめない心」と二つの例を出しているのに it で受けている。 Although these things were not directly related to my dreams, they became very important lessons in my life.

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