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日本の豊かさについての語学と医療の側面
- 日本は豊かな国である理由として、教育と医療の側面が挙げられる。
- 教育の観点から見ると、日本の現行教育システムは若者がグローバルな世界で活躍するための基盤を提供している。
- 医療の観点から見ると、日本は高齢化社会においても堅実な医療制度を持っており、これが国の豊かさを支えている。
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