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英語日記11 なぜ勉強するのか

英語日記11 なぜ勉強するのか すいませんが最近英語力のライティングをあげようと英作文をまいにち書くようにしてます。 レベルのひくい英作文ではずかしいのですが。できれば文法や細かい間違いを指摘して頂けると幸いです。 Why people study? What do you answer if you are asked why do you study? To get a good job? To earn many money? Maybe many young students answer YES. It is said that there are many smart people in Japan. I also think so. However, do you think that if a number of smart people increase, which give a chance to develop in Japan? The answer is NO. I think that talent is much more important than studying. Of course, studying is important thing, but looking for your own talent is more important.

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Why people study? →Why do people study? →疑問文なので、why 以下は疑問文の形です。 What do you answer if you are asked why do you study? →why you study →この部分は疑問文ではなく”間接疑問文”を使ったです。  間接疑問文内では、疑問文ではなく肯定文の形になります。 To earn many money? →To earn much money? →money のような物質名詞は、数じゃなく量で考える。  多いなら much 少ないなら little です。 Maybe many young students answer YES. →Maybe many young students will answer YES. →予測なので、動詞には助動詞 will が必要。maybe は副詞なので。  それか、助動詞 may を使って →Many young students may answer YES. の方が  シンプルだし、一般的な気がします。 However, do you think that if a number of smart people increase, which give a chance to develop in Japan? →However, do you think that it will give Japan a chance to develop, if the number of smart people increases? →do you think that if ~ は間接疑問文「~かどうか」になってしまうので、  まず do you think that ~ で「~だと思いますか」を終わらせて、  最後に「もし~なら」と、if 節で条件を加えるのはどうでしょうか。 →a number of だと「たくさんの」という形容詞的な意味です。  ~の数としたければ the number of ○○。 →で、「数」という三人称が主語なので、increase は s が必要。 The answer is NO. →文としては何も間違ってないのですが、前の文の  「あなたは思うか?」に対して著者さんがNOというのは  不自然な気がします。なので、それならば前の文の前半を  However, wil it give Japan ・・ とすれば良いかもしれません。  これならば著者さんがNOと言っても違和感ありません。 Of course, studying is important thing, →Of course, studying is important, →「大切なもの」と日本語では言いますが、  英語では必ずしも thing を伴うものではありません。 他の文には、文法的な間違いはないかと思います。 ご参考まで。

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