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英語日記28(2) 

すいませんが最近英語力のライティングをあげようと英作文をまいにち書くようにしてます。 レベルのひくい英作文ではずかしいのですが。できれば文法や細かい間違いを指摘して頂けると幸いです。 I have been there when I came to Australia first time. I think that the time flows really slowly in Cairns. This is because Cairns is a kind of tourist city. Many people are coming from all over the world. It may look like Hawaii. There was one thing that I could not believe was that someone walked with strip to the waist. Someone call the police and catch him if he would do it in my country. So I didn’t believe it. And I have one more thing surprising me is that many people have tattoos in Cairns. My country image of tattoo is very bad. There are few people have tattoo in my country. For example, like a group of gangster. My mother said “you mustn’t have a tattoo” before going to Australia. However, there are many tattoos includes women as well. Cairns is small city but people are good and commodity price is not expensive. Cairns is one of the city that live easily.

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I have been there when I came to Australia first time. Cairns - I have been there when I visited Australia first time. 『英語はコミュニケーションの言葉で日本語は相手の気持ちを探る言葉です。最初からthereと書かれてもきょとんとした感じ。ですから町の名を書き出しにおいてみました。この叙文(イントロ)は日本語の場合は良いですね~』 I think that the time flows really slowly in Cairns. 『the time flows really slowly = the time flows very slowly か time goes by so slowly がいいです。』 This is because Cairns is a kind of tourist city. It may look like Hawaii. 『It may look like Hawaii.を下の文からここに移しました。tourist cityを説明するために』 Many people are coming from all over the world. People come here from all over the world to enjoy his small tropical city. 『町の風景などを書いたらもっと読者に興味を与えるチャンス - 何かもっとかいてみたら?』 『上記は町についてのパラグラフでしたね。下記はcultural differencesで新しいパラグラフなので最初にはっきりしましょう。cultural shockを受けたと書き出しそして二つの例をあげる』 I was stunned at some of the things I saw there. It was cultural shock to me. For example, some people walked down the street half-naked. If it was happening in Japan, someone would have called police and be arrested. Another example is that many men and women have tattoos. My mother had told me before I left to Australia, “You mustn’t get tattoos.” 『最後に町の良い印象で終わりましょう』 Cairns is small city but people are good and commodity price is not expensive. 『People in Cairns are nice and friendly. In addition, the weather is pleasant, and living cost is reasonable. としたらどうでしょうか。commodity priceは日常生活ではつかいません、貿易や取引などでは使われます(commodity market, commodities trading)』  Cairns is one of the city that live easily. 『Cairns is one of the city all about laid-back attitude and easy living. 』 まあ、こんな程度でどうでしょうか?間違っていると思いますか回答が入ってなかったので私がチャレンジしてみました。今日始めてこのサイトに登録したので回答をインプットできるようになった次第です。私も一年前から独学。あなたの英語はとってもいいですよ。お互いがんばりましょうね。

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