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私が気になった箇所についてだけ書きます。他の回答者のコメントも参考になさって下さい。 >I appreciate that you were always thoughful to me and trying to make me happy. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and eagerness to make me happy. >And actually, you did always make me happy. And, in fact, you made me happy all the time. >But I was just protecting myself by not showing my feeling, 私には"protect"がちと大袈裟に聞こえます。何か秘密を持った人、あるいは正体を隠している人が自分を守るとか、暴力的人間から身を護るというような場合なら"protect"や"guard"でしょうが。"But I hid my real feeling."（でも、私は本当の気持を隠していました）程度でいいような気がします。"But always I hid my appreciation for your effort. I don't know why. I'm so sorry."という風にも云えます。 >though you have been patient with me and kept presenting me happy feeling. "presenting"は間違いではないのですが、ちょっと場違いな感じがします。"giving me happy feeling"辺りが妥当でしょう。 >I have just enjoyed your tenderness. "enjoy"というのは映画やTVドラマなどのエンタテインメントに対して相応しい表現です。"I'm very thankful to you for your tenderness."ではないでしょうか。"enjoy"を使うと、大勢の求愛者に囲まれた質問者が、各人の態度や芸を品定めしていたような感じに聞こえます。 >I think it was all my ego and I have been just selfish. "ego"は日本語的用法です。"I was egotistic and selfish."どちらの形容詞も似たような意味ですので、"I was just selfish."だけでいい気がしますが。 >I hurt your feeling. 偉そうな態度で意図してそうしたわけではなく、結果的にそうなったわけですから、"I'm afraid but I hurt your feeling."と下手に出るべきでしょう。 >You are a wonderful guy great in inside and out. "guy"で間違いではないのですが、尊敬の念があるなら"wonderful person"にすべきでしょう。"great in inside and out"は気持は分りますが、私はこういう表現を見聞きしたことはありません。ちゃんと出典があるのなら結構ですが。 >I thank you for everything you have done for me. "you have done"も間違いではないのですが、彼がしてくれたこと（食事を奢ってくれた、映画に誘ってくれた、ディスコに誘ってくれた等々）だけに限定されてしまうような気がします。一緒に楽しく過ごした思い出に感謝する"I thank you for giving me great time tigether."とか、"I enjoyed great time with you."などとしては如何でしょうか？ >I’m so sorry that my behavior made you hurt. "behavior"（どちらかと云うと行動）よりも"attitude"（どちらかと云うと姿勢）の方がいいと思います。 >I feel awful. これは日本語原文の「本当にごめんなさい」とは異なります。「私は最低だった」と解釈出来ますが、謝っているわけではありません。本気で謝るのなら、"I apologize."です。
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- 英語を日本語にして貰えますか？
意味が分からない所が多々あります。。。 意訳で結構ですのでヨロシクお願いします。 went you be next to me i will always have the same feeling toward you ..no matter of what happen ... this is how i am and i want you to always feel happy and care ... in the good time and bad ... only happiness can make a better life .. and i will make it come true ..i want too make it come true.
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急遽英語でメールをやりとりすることになったので、 翻訳と解説をお願いしたく、投稿を致します。 I always have correct feeling. thanks for you tell me the answer. I was just worried about… because I didn't want to let you feel bother. so… thanks for you mail again, really. ^^ 実はこの文の前に「私はこうだと思ってたよ」という文がありました。 それが I always have correct feeling.に繋がるのかなと思っているのですが イマイチわかりません。 correct feeling をいつもhaveしている。 うーん、正解の感じを持っているってことでしょうか。 形容詞correct + 名詞feelingですよね。 特殊な文法は隠されてませんよね・・・。 例えば have +○○+ing形とか・・・。 let you feel bother も 迷惑をかけたくなかった、という意味かなとにらんでいるのですが・・・。 迷惑を感じさせたなくなった という自分なりの直訳から、更に自分なりに意訳しました。 是非、全文訳と解説をお願い致します。
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訳を見てください。間違えや分からない箇所を教えてください。 Well I'm going to bed my hurt because I been thinking about you all day. I been doing ok here in Georgia. I have get out more. What do the malls look like there? And the next time you to buy me something LOL. 私はベットにはいるよ なぜなら私は君のことを一日考えてた。 私はジョージアでうまくやってる。もっと・・・？？？ どんなモールで？？何をしてたの 次ぐは私に何か買ってきて Anything, anything you think I was like. But I well like anything you get me. I hope I dream of you again so I have to look like your pic so I can. One of the best things you know about me is. That I'm funny and I make fun of anything good or bad. But I well put it In a nice way or loving way not to hurt your feeling. And I always try to plan things for I do it. I want my life to be happy and living with my living kids and wife. ・・・また君の夢をみれるといいな。君の写真をみなければ・・・??私にとって楽しみの一つ 私はおもしろいとかいいことや悪いことを楽しむ。・・・・？？ すみません、わかりませんでした。知り合いからのメールなんですが。。おしえてください
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(1)I have been thinking about you, and feeling guilty about my long silence. (2)I have been thinking of you, and feeling guilty about my long silence. このabout とofの違いは日本語でどう訳すのが、適切ですか？（男性→女性の場合）
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I’d always have the feeling that you had be en taking a chance just on that, and that kind of love would be disappearing. というのと、 Then I’d always feel that you kept on writing to me only because you were lonely and had no one else. この2つです！ 和訳お願いします！
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ここgooだけで勉強していますが、暫らく英文を書かなかったので、英語の文章が中々出てきません。再度、勉強をしなおさないとだめかと思っています。短い文章ですが、書いてみました。 Hi, my Crystal! The first, I must say to you “ I am so sorry! I haven't came here for a long time.” Did you worry about me? I have been well. How about you, Crystal? Sometimes I thought of you, but I couldn’t think and feel in English. I know I have to learn English day by day. Now my brain said to me “You can!" I should believe myself. I have you and you help me a lot for it. Crystal, I promise you that I will be learning with you. And someday I want to talk with you and my friends in English. Crystal, I have to make breakfast. So I say to you “Have a nice weekend!”
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先日私から別れを切り出したのですが、彼からの返事を訳して欲しいです。 hi, I never want to hurt you its just hard for me. I will always have a place for you and hope that you do not hate me よろしくお願いします。
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日本語の勉強をしている外国人のメル友からきたメールです。 いつも日本語でやりとりしているので、英語だとほとんど理解できません。 お恥ずかしいですが、日本語へ訳してください。 i am happy that you recover and list a little . i always will be sweet and kind to you ... and went your feel sad i be there making you feel happy ..well for now i be in the digital world ,so went you feel sad only email me .. i will warm your heart and make you feel happy i know that we still met you yet in person .but i feel that you are a sweet and kind person i always will to my best to make you happy went you feel sad i big Chu... for the best person in the world ... that is you Hanako.
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happy birthday aki I'm not sure this leteer cold arrive in your birthday or not,rather, I should have began writing earlier... Anyway congratulation!! I'm glad you become 21 years old because I can drink with you in the United States.Don't you think so? What?You never drink?Come on!! when will you be ready!? No orange juice! You have to try! or I can't wait forever ! Yeah,that kidding ^^ Of course I know you hate alcohol, so I seut a birthday present that's not kind of alcohol. I beleive you'll like it. If it's difficult to use for you or you have any guestions about my present, you can ask me!! Because, I've already researched it and I know it a lot even though I don't have it!! Hahaha!! Are you with me? Maybe You don't know what is what ^^; It's been about 7 month since I came to Los Angeles. My English skill is still poor, and that's why I'm confusing now... Don't care about my work . Everything is good. I'm learning many things little by little from my father and brother. They teach me kindly, so I'm really grateful to them. Perhaps you also have some worries . But , nobody has no worry. we have to overcome with making effort, and our efforts will be reworded. But , please let me help you when you feel down and help me when I feel down...ok? I really miss you and I hope I'll go back to Japan soon. But as you know , I have full of schedule ... it's almost working and school ... Instead, you can eat anything you want and go anywhere you want when I go back to Japan! So, please wait for me with great patience. 数年前大切な人からもらった手紙です。 どなたか意味を教えていただけませんか？ よろしくお願いします！
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