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- ドバイというアラブにある国に行ってきました。４０度を超える暑さが普通です。でも一番印象に残っているのはデザートサファリ。４WDで砂漠を走り、ベリーダンスを見たりらくだに乗ったりしました。砂漠に沈む夕日も素晴らしかったです。
- I went to Dubai in Arabu. It's was hot 40C. I was fun best it's Desert safuary. It means to take the 4WD in Desert and to eat dinner to see berry dunce and then take the Camel in Desert. The sun set was berry butiful in deaert.
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アラブの国 添削おねがいします
旅日記を英語にしたいのですが・・・語学力が・・・ 添削してください。 I went to Dubai in Arabu. It's was hot 40C . I was fun best it's Desert safuary. It means to take the 4WD in Desert and to eat dinner to see berry dunce and then take the Camel in Desert. The sun set was berry butiful in deaert. アラブにある国、ドバイに行ってきました。 とっても暑い国で４０度を超えているのが普通です。 一番印象に残っているのはデザートサファリです。 ４WDの車で砂漠を走り、砂漠の真ん中で夕方から夜にかけて食事をしたり、ベリーダンスを見たりらくだに乗ったりしました。 砂漠に沈む夕日もよかったです。
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I went to Dubai Arabu. The temperature was 40C . What struck me the most was the Desert Safary. We drove a 4WD car and rode camels in desert and ate dinner seeing the berry dunce in the evening. The sun set was very beautiful. ベリーダンスについてはスペルなどしらべてください。
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- Tacosan
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「アラブにある」ってのは意味不明ですねぇ. 「アラビア半島にある」なら Dubai, in Arabia とか Dubai in the Arabian Peninsula の方が安全だし, 「アラブ人の国」なら Dubai, an Arab country などの方がいいかも. どの場合であっても Arabu はありえないんだけど.
砂漠の真ん中は in the middle of the desert です。では～♪
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