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Even after I came back to Japan from Australia. I still wanted to go study abroad again, so I was going to the American university after working for a yen in Japan. I had been fighting with homework everyday, I had sometimes regretted about coming to the USA, but I believed that everything is going to wonderful experience in my life in the future. so I did not lose my hope. From my experience both American life and Australia, I would like to know more about people all over the world. Everyone has different characteristics, and all of them are brilliant. so my dream is to be a businessman who works all over the world. That is why I would like to study an international Business. I am not a talented person, however, I can say one thing from bottom of my heart that I always do my best for achieving my goal. 英語の文法ミスおしえていただけないですか?


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Even after I came back to Japan from Australia*, I still wanted to *go abroad to study again, so I was going to *an(まだ決まっていなければan, もうどこか決まっていればthe) American university after working for a *year in Japan. I *have been fighting with homework *every day, *and I have sometimes regretted *having come to the USA, but I *believe that everything is going to *turn out to be a wonderful experience in my life in the future. *So I did not lose my hope. *Through my experience both *in America and Australia, I would like to know more about people *in different worlds(たったこれだけの国でall over the worldなんて大袈裟). Everyone has a different character, and *each one has a certain talent. *So my dream is to be a businessman who works *globally. That is why I would like to study an international *business. I am not a talented person but I can say one thing from *the bottom of my heart: I always do my best *to achieve my goal. *は訂正したところです。文頭の小文字はやめましょう。 以上、ご参考になればと思います。



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