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次の日本語を英語に直すとき、合っているか添削をお願いします。 (1)その歌手が行くところには何処にでもたくさんのファンがついて来ます。 Wherever the singer goes place,manｙ fans follow. (2)どんなに忙しくても、彼は私の電子メールに返事をくれる。 However busy,he gives an answer to my E-mail. 細かい所まで添削してくれると幸いです。
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(1) whereverがgoの目的語に当たるので、placeは不要です。followの目的語は入れた方が的確かもしれません。 Many fans follow the singer wherever he(she) goes. (2)断言はしかねますが、語学問題であればあまり省略形は使わない方がいいのかもしれません。 However busy he is, he gives an answer to my E-mail.
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