英文の添削をお願いします。

質問

次の４つの英文を、和訳にあわせて添削していただきたいのですが、
ならべく使ってある単語を元に添削してほしいです。

１．斉藤さんはプレイ中、パスしたがらない

Saito is relutant to pass to team mate in playing game.

２．事務所に閉じ込められた僕は仕事をした

I was at work when i was confined in the company.

３．僕は高校1年生のころ、新聞配達のバイトをした

I was dispensed the news paper when i am high school.

４．斉藤さんはプレイ中は必ず一回はパスするという誓いを立てた

Saito pledged to pass for me in playing game.

回答No.5

love_pet2 · ベストアンサー

１．斉藤さんはプレイ中、パスしたがらない

Saito is reluctant to give a pass to his/her team mates during a game/practice.
（スポーツなどで、パスをだす＝give a pass to ...)
（試合中なら、単にgame, 練習中ならpractice）

２．事務所に閉じ込められた僕は仕事をした(仕事をせざるおえなかったと、解釈していいですか？）

I had no choice but to work when I was locked up in the office of the company.
（～せざるおえなかった＝have no choice but to do...）
（ただ単に仕事をしたのなら、I workedで十分です。 I am at work ＝仕事中。）

３．僕は高校1年生のころ、新聞配達のバイトをした

I had a part time job as a deliveryman of newspaper when I was in a first grade of my high school.
（dispense＝法律を施行、実行する、薬剤を調剤する）
(first grade of my high school = freshman year of my high school でもOK!）

４．斉藤さんはプレイ中は必ず一回はパスするという誓いを立てた

Saito pledged to give a pass to his/her team mates at least once in a game/practice.

動詞の時制一致のミスと、冠詞の付け忘れが多いですので、注意してください。

お礼

みなさんご回答ありがとうございました。
参考にさせて頂きます。

回答No.4

myrtille54

1. Saito unwillingly passes balls when he is playing.

2. Shut in the office, I did the task

3.I used to deliver newspapers when I was a freshman of high school.

4. Saito swore that he would always pass balls at least once when he is playing.

回答No.3

marbleshit

１．斉藤さんはプレイ中、パスしたがらない

Saito is relutant to pass to team mate in palying game.
→ Saito is reluctant to pass to his/her team mates throughout the game.

２．事務所に閉じ込められた僕は仕事をした

I was at work when i was confined in the company.
→ I worked as I was confined in the office.

３．僕は高校1年生のころ、新聞配達のバイトをした

I was dispensed the news paper when i am high school.
→ I used to work part-time job of newspaper delivery when I was a first grade in high school.

４．斉藤さんはプレイ中は必ず一回はパスするという誓いを立てた

Saito pledged to pass for me in playing game.
→ Saito pledged to pass at least once throughout the game.

回答No.2

SPS700

1. Saito doesn't want to pass the ball during a game.

2. Locked in my office, I worked.

3. I had a paper route when I was in the first year of high school.

4. Saito swore that he would pass the ball at least once during a game.

とも。

回答No.1

ShowMeHow

1.　Saito is relutant to pass to teammates while playing game.
2. I was confined in the office, so I worked.
3. I distributed newspapers when I was (a freshman) in highschool.
4. Saito pledged to pass at least once during a game.

いくつかの単語は代えざるを得ませんでした。