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How many differential are there between you and I. 私とあなたとではどのくらいの差がありますか？ という文を作りたいとき、この英文では通じませんか？ また、その場合、もっといい文がありましたら、教えて下さい。
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こんにちは。 まず英語の文法だけ先に直しますね。 How many differences are there between us? How many differences do we have? how manyということなので、私たちにはいくつ違うこと（出身国が違う、血液型が違う、学歴が違う、、、）があるか聞きたいのですか？（ちょっと不可能なような気もしますが） それとももっと大きな数えられないものの違いを聞いているのですか？ how many=数えられるもの how much=数えられないもの と使い分けます。 ＞私とあなたとではどのくらいの差がありますか？ 何の差があるのかが分かった方がいいと思います。 あえて上の文章だけを考えると How different between us? 私たちはどう違う？ 今時点ではこれが一番、無難だと思います。
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