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In the experiment of administering Isoprenaline to a rat, rat's heart rate went up. This shows that Isoprenaline stimulates a sympathetic nerve. And it shows that Isoprenaline caused decrease in blood pressure. In the experiment of administering to a rat, showed that cocaine caused decrease in rat’s haert rate. On the other hands, its blood pressure was increased. Thus it is suggested that Cocain stimulates parasympathetic nerve which is involved in the decreasing of heart rate and central nerve which lead to increase of blood pressure.
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- wathavy
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文章を修正すると、大変な労力になるので勘弁を。 もっと英語の文章を読んだほうがいいと思うよ。 文が長すぎる。もっと切れのいい文章は、短い文で終わる。 よく研究論文では見かける文章だけど、そもそも参考にしているのが研究論文ばかりだから、第二外国語として英語をつかってるんですよ。みたいな英語になっちゃってる。 普通の文章を読んで、いかに自分の文章が複雑怪奇か理解するべきだと思う。とにかく分かりにくい。自分で読んでて自然だと思うのなら、余計に問題だ。 Nature, Science 辺りを読んで、もっと平易な文章でも科学論文が書けることを見るべきだと思う。 違うかな？
- taka_tora
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こんにちは 意味は十分伝わってきます。 微修正した結果を以下に示しますので、ご参考に （私も#1さんが書かれている上級生以下のレベルかも知れませんので^^;、あくまで参考程度に） In the experiment of administering Isoprenaline to a rat, rat's heart rate went up. This shows that Isoprenaline stimulates a sympathetic nerve. And it shows that Isoprenaline caused decrease in blood pressure. （ここまで修正なし） In the experiment of administering to a rat, it was shown that cocaine caused decrease in rat's heart rate. On the other hand, its blood pressure was increased. （一文目のカンマの後を修正しました。また”hands”を”hand”に修正） Thus it is suggested that cocaine stimulates parasympathetic nerve involved in the decreasing of heart rate, and central nerve involved in the increasing of blood pressure. （Cocain の先頭を小文字に修正しました。また、副交感神経と中枢神経に関する記載部分を私の趣味で修正しました。意味が変わってしまっていたらごめんなさい）
上級生に見て貰った方が良いよ。述語的には素人だとかなりヤバイ内容だし、読んでいると頭痛くなってくるから。 まあ、書き直しだね。
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