•彼は 4 打席連続ホームランをかっとばしたことがある.
He once hit four home runs in four consecutive times at bat.
- 研究社 新和英中辞典
•私は 昔, 近代社募集の懸賞小説の審査員をしたことがある.
I was once judge in a competition held by Kindaisha to award prizes for fiction.
- 研究社 新和英中辞典
•私もずいぶんひとりで旅行したことがあるので, 知らない町で迷うのがどんなものかよくわかります.
I've traveled a lot myself and know what it's like to be [get] lost in a new city.
- 研究社 新和英中辞典
上記の英語の例文だけに注目して読みました。
過去形はただ過去そういう事実があったということのみ、
現在完了形は話し手の意味合いに（過去から今においてね）ということが読み取れるのですが、
以下のニュアンスを英語にするならどうしたらいいでしょうか？
「
今までに一度高価なカメラをなくしたことがあるのです。それ以来安いカメラを使っています」
I once lost my expensive camera. Since then I have used a cheep one.
これでいいでしょうか？よろしくお願いします。
下の英文の中で特に、「順位付けと賞品の授与」の英文がよくないのではと思っています。もちろん、他にもありますが。よろしくお願いします。
the first characteristics of the geme is combination of competition and recreation.
このゲームの第一の特徴は、競争とレクレーションの融合である。
The second is the ranking of competition and the award of prizes.
ふたつめは、順位付けと賞品の授与である。
These characteristics is basically similar to the Sports day.
これらの特徴は、基本的に運動会と似ている。
It is clear that the geme is closely connected with the Sports day.
このゲームと運動会に密接な関係があることは、明白である。
小説の一部です、和訳お願いします。
Then, the inexorable voice went on, a voice which to these miserable
souls was no longer that of the lawyer, but an issue from the grave they
had themselves dug for Anthony Westonhaugh, know that your abstinence
comes too late; that you have already drunk the toast destined to end
your lives.
A label is easily changed and--Luke,John, Hector, I know you all so well--that bottle has been greedily emptied by you; and while I, who sipped sparingly, lived three weeks, you, who have drunk deep, have not three hours before you, possibly not three minutes.
How To Make Babies
After much controversy, a school adopted a sex-education program.
One mother hadn't been too enthusiastic about it and was worried how her small daughter would react.
Imagine her feelings when the youngster came home and asked, 'Mommy, guess what? We learned how to make babies today!'
'What?' the mother gasped.
Then, trying to speak calmly, she asked, 'Tell me ,dear,how DO you make babies?'
'Easy,' the little one said. 'You drop the Y and add I-E-S.'
ジョークの部分も教えて貰えると嬉しいです！
【英語の原文】
There is no real excellence in all this world
which can be separated from right living.
【翻訳版の和訳】
正しい生き方なくして真の成功はありえない。
７つの習慣という本の最初の一文なのですが、
この原文を直訳してみました。
【私が考えた直訳】
全世界において
正しい生き方から切り離される真の優秀はない。
つまり、この原文は、
正しい生き方はすべて真の優秀である。
正しい生き方には真の優秀でないものはない。
という意味であって、
正しい生き方がなければ、真の優秀はない。
という条件を表す意味はありませんよね？
この条件を表す「なくして」の部分は
日本人にとって分かり易くするために翻訳者が考え出した
意訳と考えて正しいでしょうか？
あと、正しい解釈に忠実で理解しやすい意訳ができれば、
併せてお願いします。
下記を使いたいのですが、ライセンスが英語ではっきりわかりません。
http://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/13400-1000-stars
翻訳サイトでみるとおそらく大丈夫だと思うのですが、何か条件などありますでしょうか？
クレジット表記などはなしでしょうか？
YOU MAY NOT REDISTRIBUTE, TRANSMIT, OR SELL THE CONTENTS OF THIS FILE IN WHOLE in any form. All rights not expressly granted by Brusheezy are reserved.
上記をhtmlファイルのindex.htmlにきさいすればいいのですかね？
ライセンス
ou have permission to view, download, edit and remix the contents of this file for personal and commercial purposes. You shall provide a link back to www.brusheezy.com (where applicable) or provide a credit to the Brusheezy contributor and to Brusheezy.com in connection with the commercial use of any of the contents in this file. Such credit shall be in the following form: "Contributor's Username/brusheezy.com." In the event that the contents of this file is used in connection with an art print work or product print work, you shall use reasonable efforts to credit the Brusheezy contributor and Brusheezy.com website as provided above. Except as expressly permitted by the author in writing, YOU MAY NOT REDISTRIBUTE, TRANSMIT, OR SELL THE CONTENTS OF THIS FILE IN WHOLE in any form. All rights not expressly granted by Brusheezy are reserved.
商用WEBサイトで使いたいのですが、MITなどはっきり書いておらず難しいです。
下記を使いたいのですが、ライセンスが英語ではっきりわかりません。
http://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/13400-1000-stars
翻訳サイトでみるとおそらく大丈夫だと思うのですが、何か条件などありますでしょうか？
クレジット表記などはなしでしょうか？
YOU MAY NOT REDISTRIBUTE, TRANSMIT, OR SELL THE CONTENTS OF THIS FILE IN WHOLE in any form. All rights not expressly granted by Brusheezy are reserved.
上記をhtmlファイルのindex.htmlにきさいすればいいのですかね？
ライセンス
ou have permission to view, download, edit and remix the contents of this file for personal and commercial purposes. You shall provide a link back to www.brusheezy.com (where applicable) or provide a credit to the Brusheezy contributor and to Brusheezy.com in connection with the commercial use of any of the contents in this file. Such credit shall be in the following form: "Contributor's Username/brusheezy.com." In the event that the contents of this file is used in connection with an art print work or product print work, you shall use reasonable efforts to credit the Brusheezy contributor and Brusheezy.com website as provided above. Except as expressly permitted by the author in writing, YOU MAY NOT REDISTRIBUTE, TRANSMIT, OR SELL THE CONTENTS OF THIS FILE IN WHOLE in any form. All rights not expressly granted by Brusheezy are reserved.
商用WEBサイトで使いたいのですが、MITなどはっきり書いておらず難しいです。
長くて申し訳ございませんが、英訳おねがいします。ニュアンスがわかりません
英訳お願いします。私は彼がいますが、好きな人ができてしまいました。
でも素直にはなれず、喧嘩しました。怒っているのかニュアンスがわかりません。
どなたか訳してもらえますか？
女：i know i was being selfish last night when you are busy
男：No your not being selfish i just think its not good idea
女：what is mean
男：im sorry though i know you want to see me i just dont think it is good idea
女：why?
男：i think you deserve more then i can offer
女：？？？
男：i know you want boyfriend and right now i cannot have girlfriend so i think maybe you should find someone else
女：i usually dont need boyfriend..you dont know me well.i like just fun and something like that..you dont know me..im maybe not good person
男：by your text messeges you give off a different vibe
女：you dont know me really...
女：i dont need boyfriend..so i just told you i dont like something is such a hassle i like just fun
男：you just text me way too much making me think you are looking for boyfriend
女：im soorry i have boyfriend 4years..so idont need boyfriend..you asked me before..JK is your boyfriend? its true.do you know me?
男：haha i knew it and you told me no. i should just trust my instincts
女：then you never asked me..sorry
男：yea its ok idont care about that as long as you dont get too attached
女：next month he is going trip..so..still i wanna see you ..its true
男：sounds like trouble to me ..does he know?
女：no! he doesnt care me.he doesnt try to know about me. anyway you dont care about me right?
男：still sounds like too much drama for me
女：why too much drama? you told me you dont care..you dont need girlfriend i dont need boyfriend..
男：yea i dont but i dont really care to get involved either... its just too much right now . im done
女：i dont know what you want to say..you dont like 'i want you' but i didnt tell you that
男：your situation is too complicated for me i just dont wanna get involved with you
女：i dont know.. i mean to say that you want me to tell you..so. is it okay i will break up him right now? and i dont need boyfrien im free! its okay???!!
男：No thats not the point..yea..then ill be clear about it you should probably find someone else
女：Tell me really want you want to say ! it was better that i didnt tell you true things.. if i tell you whatever..you will be mad..
男：i dont want to hang out anymore. im not mad..im just done
女：im just done too.
hello, im really sorry but i had my phone in my pocket at the club last night and i didnt intend to buy this item. i accidently did it somehow i apologize
Although an email is not enough, and a video is not enough as well, I want
to try to tell you how much I appreciated your gift!
I got so, deeply moved from this…that I don’t even know what to say (and
this is so rare!).
I was expecting to receive my new watercolor brushes today, so, when the
postman rang the doorbell, I though ‘YEPPEEE!!! My new brushes! Hurray!’
and I hurried to the door! Then he said: “There are 2 packages for you
boy!”. I thought “Weird, the sent 2 packages for 3 small brushes?”. Then
I read what was written on one of them… and I totally forgot about brushes.
It was your gift. I was...stunned! Surprised! Totally, incredibly happy.
I went back inside, here in front of my pc. And I started shaking, as I was
so…! I opened it, and saw your sweet presents, and sent you the SMS and
LINE messages, then read the letter. Yes, I did cry (please, don’t think I
am a crybaby! XD). I got really moved by what you did.
You know I like Ranma and bought me something about it...it's...I can’t describe how happy I am, that's why I will record the video
right after finishing the email. And I love everything you sent me! The
Christmas Origami, so beautiful and delicate!. And the Onsen souvenir ;__;
thank you for thinking about me when you went there…! And the stamps, and
the letter… Mika!
There are so many things I would like to be able to say. Mika, you are so
special for me, thank you!
I will now record the video, and write the transcript of what I say (I hope
I don’t start crying! XDDDD I promise I won’t!)
Take care, Mika, I am with you. Always. Don’t ever feel alone. Because if
you need, I will be with you. I will never leave you alone!
Fabio
The transcript of the video------------ gosh XD okay I cried but just a
little XDDDD Sorry!
Hi….hey!
Its….hard to find the right words to thank you. I wrote it in the email but
I want to thank you. I know it’s not enough, it will never be enough…a
video, or an email!
I…. I am really, really happy…uhm…for…for what you sent me. I really
like these (showing ranma notebooks)…. I like this (the souvenir from
onsen). I like…the stamps….and the letter! And this…well, you wrote on it
so I like it!
I…I am so happy of it. And… I don’t know exactly what I want to say!
Because…uhm… (pause) I said I would have done that but I’m doing it XD
don’t worry! It’s just…thank you.
I appreciate it, I appreciate it so much! And… If I ever feel alone… I
will… shake this! I will shake this and I will know you are somewhere and…
hopefully happy! And….uhm! Sorry… And… aww my voice sorry! I am so so
happy you sent me these things that I don’t even know what to say… now
you’ll think I’m a crybaby right? I am not a crybaby…but…I, I am… I got
so moved from your present that really I don’t know what to say!
And….Sorry….! Sorry I am so happy that I can’t help it. I am a crybaby
right? XD You think so! But… uhm…uhm….yes!
thank you…thank you so much! Thank you so much! For your really…
unique gift! Thank you!
Although an email is not enough, and a video is not enough as well, I want
to try to tell you how much I appreciated your gift!
I got so, deeply moved from this…that I don’t even know what to say (and
this is so rare!).
I was expecting to receive my new watercolor brushes today, so, when the
postman rang the doorbell, I though ‘YEPPEEE!!! My new brushes! Hurray!’
and I hurried to the door! Then he said: “There are 2 packages for you
boy!”. I thought “Weird, the sent 2 packages for 3 small brushes?”. Then
I read what was written on one of them… and I totally forgot about brushes.
It was your gift. I was...stunned! Surprised! Totally, incredibly happy.
I went back inside, here in front of my pc. And I started shaking, as I was
so…! I opened it, and saw your sweet presents, and sent you the SMS and
LINE messages, then read the letter. Yes, I did cry (please, don’t think I
am a crybaby! XD). I got really moved by what you did.
You know I like Ranma and bought me something about it...it's...I can’t describe how happy I am, that's why I will record the video
right after finishing the email. And I love everything you sent me! The
Christmas Origami, so beautiful and delicate!. And the Onsen souvenir ;__;
thank you for thinking about me when you went there…! And the stamps, and
the letter… Mika!
There are so many things I would like to be able to say. Mika, you are so
special for me, thank you!
I will now record the video, and write the transcript of what I say (I hope
I don’t start crying! XDDDD I promise I won’t!)
Take care, Mika, I am with you. Always. Don’t ever feel alone. Because if
you need, I will be with you. I will never leave you alone!
Fabio
The transcript of the video------------ gosh XD okay I cried but just a
little XDDDD Sorry!
Hi….hey!
Its….hard to find the right words to thank you. I wrote it in the email but
I want to thank you. I know it’s not enough, it will never be enough…a
video, or an email!
I…. I am really, really happy…uhm…for…for what you sent me. I really
like these (showing ranma notebooks)…. I like this (the souvenir from
onsen). I like…the stamps….and the letter! And this…well, you wrote on it
so I like it!
I…I am so happy of it. And… I don’t know exactly what I want to say!
Because…uhm… (pause) I said I would have done that but I’m doing it XD
don’t worry! It’s just…thank you.
I appreciate it, I appreciate it so much! And… If I ever feel alone… I
will… shake this! I will shake this and I will know you are somewhere and…
hopefully happy! And….uhm! Sorry… And… aww my voice sorry! I am so so
happy you sent me these things that I don’t even know what to say… now
you’ll think I’m a crybaby right? I am not a crybaby…but…I, I am… I got
so moved from your present that really I don’t know what to say!
And….Sorry….! Sorry I am so happy that I can’t help it. I am a crybaby
right? XD You think so! But… uhm…uhm….yes!
thank you…thank you so much! Thank you so much! For your really…
unique gift! Thank you!
I is singer.私は歌手だ
This is pen.(do you think that this is coffee?)ペンだ（コーヒーに見えるか？）
This is 5 paper.紙が５枚
I not play baseball.私は野球をしない
He play baseball.彼は野球をやる
You did is young in 10 year ago.十年前きみは若かった
これらは誤った英語ですが、ネイティブにはどんな感じに聞こえるのでしょうか？強引に和訳すると、、、
私は歌手にする。
これペンみたいな。
これ５紙（ファイブカミ）みたいな。
私でないは野球をやる。
彼は野球をやらせる。
十年前の間きみは若かっている。
酷い英語だと熱心に教師が教えても、それを堂々と使う生徒からすれば正しい英語であって、許されているのでしょう。これだと虚しい指導に終わります。確かに、５文型だけは正しく、生徒の言い分は一理あります。英語の酷さの危機感を生徒に教えるには、和訳したときどれだけ酷い日本語になるかを伝えるべきかと思い、こうして質問しています。
生徒の言い訳
（１）ｂｅ動詞なんてｉｓだけでイーじゃん。なぜａｍとａｒｅがあるの？
（２）なぜアメリカ人は冠詞を要求するの？ａとかｔｈｅが抜けたとして、だから何？
（３）３単現のｓの効果は何だろう？
（４） I never play baseball.は正しいのにneverをnotに変えると助動詞のdoが必要なのか？
