私はやっと彼女が運命の人だとわかった
これは英語でfinally i found that she was the oneが時制の一致でただしいと思うんですが学校のネイティブの先生が会話などだとその状況が変わってなかったら時制の一致しなくてもいいと言ってました。
じゃi found that she is the oneでも大丈夫なのでしょうか??すいませんが教えて下さい
英語(英文)の添削
学校の授業で書いてきてくださいといわれて書いたものです。
どこかおかしい所や、他の表現に変えた方が良いところがあれば教えてください。
自分のお気に入りの場所の紹介文です。
I know there are many parks in Aichi. One of my favorite places is a park called Tsutsujinosato. The park was complicated in 1992. I was surprised that the year is the same as my birth year. The park is located by windmills. There are a lot of trees around the park, so the atomosphere is quite and peaceful. We can be relaxed. The park is famous for a long slide of strange shape. Itlooks like a big snake. It makes the place funny. An open space in the park that I often play baseball with my friends is very large. A steam locomotive has long stopped n the park but it took off too many years ago. Now, Nakagawa city keep it and we can enjoy riding on it. In spring, the park is filled with a lot of flowers of azalea. It is very beautiful. We can feel its sweet smell. Therefore, I recomend to visit in April. There are a lot of happy points in Tsutsujinosato. It is the best place for me to play.
自分が気になるところは、文頭に多少The parkが多いことです。他は自分の今の力ではどうしようもなくて・・・
指摘して下さる方がいれば本当に助かります。よろしくお願いします。
くもんのドリルに下記2つの文があります。
I live in Tokyo.
Tokyoというのは1つしかないので、in the Tokyoとはならないのでしょうか?
What flower does she like?
flowerにsが付かない理由を教えてください。
ごく初歩的な質問で恥ずかしいのですが、どうぞよろしくお願いします。