添削依頼：質問文章の日記を要約・タイトル・ハッシュタグに変換
- 質問者はYafuokuで売ったバッグを包むための適切な商品を見つけるためにお店に行ったが見つからず、結局郵便局で買うことにした。お昼を食べずに行ったために夜ご飯にお気に入りのラーメン屋へ行き、美味しかったが、自分で料理をしないといけないと感じている。
- 質問者はYafuokuで売ったバッグに合う商品をお店で探したが見つからず、代わりに郵便局で購入することに決めた。それからお腹が空いたため、お気に入りのラーメン屋で夕食をとったが、自炊をしなければならないと感じている。
- 質問者はYafuokuで売ったバッグに合う商品をお店で探したが見つからず、代わりに郵便局で購入することに決めた。夕食を食べるためにお気に入りのラーメン屋に行ったが、自炊を始めなければならないと思っている。
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日記の添削をお願いします
Today, I was tired to go to some shops which were likely to sell something appropriate for packing the bag which I had sold on Yafuoku. In spite of my labor, however, I couldn’t find it. So I ended up to decide to buy it in the post office when I send the bag. It was 8 pm, and I didn’t have lunch and got hungry, so I went to my favorite Ramen shop for dinner. It was still very good despite I ate it many times. Only, I am feeling that I must cook foods myself, because I have begun Palsytem. I will do tomorrow. 英語としておかしいところやこうしたほうがより自然だというところを遠慮なく指摘してください。
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I [got] tired today [as I went] to some shops which were likely to sell something appropriate for packing the bag which I had sold on Yafuoku. (I was tired to ...とすると、～するのに飽きた、と読めてしまう) (In spite of my labor, ←howeverとかぶるのでいらない) I couldn’t find it, [however]. もしくは、Although I searched and searched every shop, I couldn't find it. So I (ended up to ←ここも同じようなことを言っている。つけてもいいけど余計な感じ) [decided] to buy it in the post office when I send the bag. It was 8 pm. I got hungry because I didn’t have lunch and got hungry. So I went to my favorite Ramen shop (for dinner ←いらないかな). It was still very good [although] I ate it many times. Only, I am feeling that I must cook foods myself, because I have begun Palsytem. (←この文は何を言いたいのかわからない。特にonly。そして、begun Palsystemとmust cookの部分のつながりがどうしてかわからない) I will do [it] tomorrow.
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- 英語
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