English Email to a Friend - Grammar Check and Feedback
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英語が得意な方、友人へのメールを英文で作りましたので文法などが間違っていないか教えて下さい！ Nice to get your message too. How was your walk? It is nice wethear here today! How is over there? お散歩どうだった？こっちは今日いい天気だよ！ そっちはどう？ I lived in the apartment of near the my parent's home. わたしは実家の近くのアパートに住んでいたんだ But I moved back home because I save up for a trip to Canada. でもカナダの旅費を貯めるために実家へ戻ってきたの I'm glad that you got to relax. I think that It is important to relax away from work. あなたがリラックス出来てよかった 仕事を忘れてリラックスすることも大切だと思うよ I also have the day off twice a month on Tuesday. I have five-day holiday called "Golden Week" at the beginning of May. わたしは月2回火曜日もお休みだよ 5月の初めに、ゴールデンウィークと呼ばれる連休が5日間あるんだ！ I have never played squash. I want to try that, too! スカッシュはしたことがないの でもやってみたい！ I like all kinds of movies. Oh, but I don't like scary movie. I saw frozen a few days ago. I have never seen X-Men. Was the movie nice? わたしは全ての種類の英語が好きだよ あ、でもホラー映画は好きじゃない この前はアナと雪の女王を見たよ X-Menは見たことないんだ。それは面白いの？ Thank you very much for telling me about nice place. I would like to go to many places in Canada! いい場所(おすすめの)について教えてくれてありがとう カナダのたくさんの場所に行って見たいな I'm sorry. I thought that I had sent a picture. Have you received it? ごめんなさい 写真を送ったつもりでした 届いているかな？ Thank you for being patient with my English. 私の下手な英語に付き合ってくれてありがとう Have a wonderful day :) 素敵な一日を 以上です！ 英語初心者が考えた文なので伝わるか不安です。。 よろしくお願いします！！
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変だなと思ったとこだけ修正します。 I get back to my parents house for the purpose of saving up money for the trip to Canada, though. もしくは Though I lived in the apartment, I get back to my parents house for the purpose of saving up money for the trip to Canada. I think relaxing is sometimes more important than working. あなたの上げた文でもしっかり伝わると思いますが、thinkの後のthatはメッセージのときなどは省略されますよ！ エッセイなどしっかりした文を書くときは書いたほうがいいです。 I have five-off holidays called "Golden Week" at the beginning of May. これはただholidayの複数が抜けてただけです。 I saw Frozen a few days ago. これもただfrozenのFが大文字になってないだけです。 Thank you very much for telling me about nice places in Canada. これもplaceのthe,a もしくは複数型が抜けてるだけです。 I'm sorry if you haven't received pictures yet, but I thought I sent you the pictures. これは質問主さんの文の意味的に「写真を送ったつもりなんだけど、届いてなかったらごめんなさい。でも送ったと思ったんだけど。」という文にしてみました。 Thank you for being patient with my poor English. 質問主さんのいう「下手な英語」ならpoorがつきます。 でも僕は質問主さんの英語はほぼパーフェクトだと思うので、poorをつけるまでもないと思います！ 全くもって問題ないです！ むしろ回答者たち（僕を含めた）修正済みの英語ではなく自分の英語を送った方が気持ちが伝わる気がします！笑 後、省略型にした方がフレンドリーですよ！ I have seen→I've seen Want to→wanna等などです！ 省略型とそのままの形ではニュアンスが違うことなどもありますし！ can'tとcannotではcannnotの方が強い否定になったりするものなので！ 頑張って下さい！
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- marbleshit
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Nice to get your message too. How was your walk? It is nice WEATHER here today! How is over there? お散歩どうだった？こっちは今日いい天気だよ！ そっちはどう？ I lived in the apartment near my parent's home, わたしは実家の近くのアパートに住んでいたんだ before I moved back home on the purpose of saving up money for a trip to Canada. でもカナダの旅費を貯めるために実家へ戻ってきたの I'm glad that you are relaxing. I think that it is important for you to stay away from work and relax. あなたがリラックス出来てよかった 仕事を忘れてリラックスすることも大切だと思うよ I also have two days off a month on Tuesday. I have five-day holidays called "Golden Week" at the beginning of May. わたしは月2回火曜日もお休みだよ 5月の初めに、ゴールデンウィークと呼ばれる連休が5日間あるんだ！ I have never played squash, and I want to try! スカッシュはしたことがないの でもやってみたい！ I like all kinds of movies. Oh, but I don't like scary movies. I saw frozen a few days ago. I have never seen X-Men. Is it fun? わたしは全ての種類の英語が好きだよ あ、でもホラー映画は好きじゃない この前はアナと雪の女王を見たよ X-Menは見たことないんだ。それは面白いの？ Thank you very much for telling me about the nice places. I would like to go to as many places as possible in Canada! いい場所(おすすめの)について教えてくれてありがとう カナダのたくさんの場所に行って見たいな I'm sorry. I thought that I could send you a picture. Have you received it? ごめんなさい 写真を送ったつもりでした 届いているかな？ Thank you for being patient with my English. 私の下手な英語に付き合ってくれてありがとう Have a wonderful day :) 素敵な一日を
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