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以下文章を添削いただけると助かります Schizophrenic patient are ameliorated with the use of these drugs. One advantage of psychological treatment is a patient can make functional a recovery such as fewer stay-at-homes, less incoherence, fewer hallucinations of hearing, and are less mad easily. However, a clear disadvantage is the medicine's adverse effects.
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気が付いた点だけ、 ＞Schizophrenic patient are ameliorated with the use of these drugs. patient＝＞patients ＞One advantage of psychological treatment is a patient can make functional a recovery such as fewer stay-at-homes, less incoherence, fewer hallucinations of hearing, and are less mad easily. However, a clear disadvantage is the medicine's adverse effects. One advantage=>One of the advantages a patient can make functional a recovery=>patients can make a functional recovery and are=> and これで、全てだと思いますが素人の僕よりも英語大達人のご回答を待った方が懸命かも知れません。
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ありがとうございます 言葉が足りずに申し訳ありません、訳して欲しいのではなく 私が書いたエッセイの文法を添削いただきたいのです、文法苦手なので
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