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- 英語の添削をお願いします。途中でつまづいてしまい困っています。
- 両親自身の家庭の崩壊について、英訳後の文章の一部を変更したい場合はどう訳せばよいかわかりません。
- お手数おかけいたしますが、英語がお得意な方に添削またはアドバイスをお願いします。
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ある文章を英訳していたのですが、途中でつまづいてしまい困っています。 英語がお得意な方、添削またはアドバイスしていただけないでしょうか？ 【原文】 もうひとつは両親自身の家庭の崩壊です。 両親自身が家庭の愛情を知らないと、 自分に家族ができた場合どのように家庭を作っていけばよいかわからないのです。 崩壊した家庭のモデルしか親の中にないため、親は崩壊した家庭しか作れないのです。 【英訳】 Another one is collapse of the parent’s home. If parents don't know domestic love, they do not understand how to make their home when they had families on oneself. Because parents know only the model of the broken home, parents can build only it. また、2つ目の「両親自身が家庭の愛情を知らないと～」の文を、 「両親自身が家庭の愛情を知らないと、 途中で信頼できる大人に出会い愛情に満ちた人間関係の結び方を体験しない限り、 いざ自分に家族ができた場合どのように家庭を作っていけばよいかわからないのです。」 にしたい場合はどう訳せばよいのでしょうか？ お手数おかけいたしますが、よろしくお願いいたします。
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参考までに the other is the deterioration of responsible parenthood and a lack of loveness for children in their formative years. without family ties based on trust and a sense of loveness out of parents, people would not be able to properly run their own household and therein build family ties well when they grow up. for this reason, it is considered that this deterioration leads to taper off production of the ideal family model within contemporary societies. だいぶ日本語の文章と変わってしまいましたが、許して下さい。それと文法チェックはどなたか別の方お願いして下さい（笑）すこし文章がごちゃごちゃしすぎました。 参考まででした
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