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ぱっと見たかんじ意味が読み取れないものがありますがなんとなくで・・ >I have been studying for two years 何を勉強してるかが明確になっていません。 >I major overall policy there,and that study the various learning such as internatinal relatins,enviromental,and law. my major is ～, and there I study ～の方がいいかと。 >I'm happy to go to school,because I fortunate to have a lot of friends like best friends and study there. I like going to school because I have many good friend to study withって事でしょうか？ >I study hard to achive my dream from now on for becoming a lawyer and speaking English fluently. My future dream is to become a lawyer, and therefor I am studying English very hard right now. >But I often change of pace at times. ・・？ >All one can say is that ,as I am, I have to do my best in any case All I can say is that I have to do my best at all time >for the porpose of getting my priorities. なぞです・・ 国際弁護士にはなるつもりはないんでしょうが もう少し英語を身につける努力をするべきだろうなと思う文章ですね
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