大学受験英作文の構文を増やしてみたが使いこなせず
- 大学受験英作文の構文を増やしてみましたが、使いこなせません。最近のインターネットの普及により、本を丹念に読む人が減っていることは残念です。
- 読書の面白さは、人とのつきあいのように途中でさまざまな感情を抱き、思いがけない発見をすることです。
- 大学受験英作文を勉強しているものの、新しい構文に慣れるのが難しく、使いこなせません。現代社会では、インターネットの普及により、本をじっくり読むことが少なくなっているようです。
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すこし構文を増やしてみました。…使いこなせませんが。 最近、インターネットが盛んになったせいか、本を端から端まで読む人が少なくなったのは残念です。 It is a pity that there are few people now to read a book carefully ,propably because of getting Internet more popular . 人とのつきあいのように途中でいろいろなことを感じたり、思いがけない発見をしたりできるところが読書の面白さです。 The pleasure of reading is feeling many things and finding something you had not thought on the way to such as connection with other people . よろしくお願いします
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It is a pity that there are few [people now to read→people who read through] a book carefully, probably because [of getting Internet more popular→the Internet has recently become very popular]. "because of"名詞句にする方が楽そうですが，"because..."副詞節の法が文が簡単になります． The pleasure of reading [books] is [feeling many things and finding something→to feel and find things] you [had→have] not thought [on the way→of] [to such as connection→just like you interact] with other people. "think of"と"interact with"は必須です．
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