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教育現場における愛情を持った教師とは？
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教育現場については何も知らない私だが、見えやプライド捨て子供たちに愛情を持って接し、本気で 子どもたちと向き合っていく教師になりたい。 「何も知らない」と言う部分を直訳で I don't knowと訳してしまうと、“私の知ったことじゃない”と言う感じの無責任なイメーがします。なので、ここは I am still learning として、“今はまだ知らないけれど、知るために頑張っている”のニュアンスを出した方がいいでしょう。 I'm still learning what education is. くらいでよいのでは？ 続いて、”見えやプライド捨て”ですが、Vanityはともかく、Prideをn't have では、親御さんが不安になりますよ！（＾ー＾） Prideは省略してもよいでしょう。 get along with children with my affection for them fullは childrenはどのchildrenなのかはっきりさせた方が英語らしいです。あなたが教師であるなら、あなたが向き合う子供は、生徒ですよね？ my studentsを代わりに使うのはどうでしょう？ またａｆｆｅｃｔｉｏｎよりloveの方が、直接的で伝わり易いです。 なので、 get along with my students with full of my love ではいかがでしょうか？ ご参考になれば幸いです。
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