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日本語→英語の翻訳の添削をお願いします。

海外の歌手へファンレターを出したいのですが、英語の知識が未熟なので不安です。 添削をお願いします。 【日本語】 （歌手名）、26歳の誕生日おめでとうございます。 はじめまして。わたしは、日本に住む26歳の男性です。 （曲名）をはじめて聞いた時からあなたのファンです。 去年の12月に娘が生まれました。名前は美音です。 名前は日本語で美しい音という意味です。 あなたのように美しく、音楽が大好きな女の子に育って欲しいという願いでつけました。 同封している絵はわたしからの誕生日プレゼントです。 あなたの独創的で刺激的な曲を聴きながら描きました。 幼い頃から絵を描くことが大好きで、今でも趣味として描いています。 よかったら受け取ってください。 忙しいと思いますが、もしよろしければ同封した写真にサインを下さい。 わたしの誕生日は4月1日で、あなたと同じおひつじ座です。 わたしの最高の誕生日プレゼントになります。 いつも日本からあなたを応援しています。国境を越えて。 【英語】 Hello,Ms.○○○. Congratulation on your 26th birthday! Nice to meet you. I'm a 26-years-old man in Japan. I've been your fan since I listened 〝○○○○〟. My daughter was born in December of last year. Her name is　〝美音（Mio)〟. The name means 〝beautiful sound〟in Japan. Have a wish in the name as beautiful as you that want to grow up in the music-loving girl. I'm enclosing a birthday present for you. I drew while listening your creative and exciting songs. I've liked drawing pictures since my childhood. I hope you like it. I know you are busy, but if I may, I'd like to to ask you to give me a autograph on a picture enclosed. My birthday is April 1. Aries is the same as you.The autograph will be my best birthday present. I always cheer you up from Japan over the border.

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添削はできませんが、こんなサイトもあります。 lang8（http://lang-8.com/） 質問者さんが今後もファンレターなどを出されるのであれば、 知っていて損はないと思います。 投稿すると、世界中の人が添削してくれます。 今回のように日本語と英語を併記していれば、 両方操れる人が添削してくれると思います。

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